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By : HildaMalfoy
  • From missmonet on December 22, 2007
    Is there anyway that you could kill off that bitch Ginny please that way Harry can get with Hermione.
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  • From amyfeddy on December 21, 2007
    Update quick, I love this story. The tension that you are building between harry and hermione is just great. I love that she didn't let ginny bring her to tears either. This hermione is great.
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  • From ANON - Anche on December 21, 2007
    you updated!!! woo-hoo!! great chapter i like what you've done with ginny, i haven't read many fics where she is portrayed as a bitch so reading her character in that sense is a great change! bring on harry's two weeks of freedom and hopefully some harry/hermione scenes very soon!!!
    great work can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2007
    hello, just wanted to tell you that i think you're developing a great story here, i'm hooked already.
    great work more please!
    anche
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  • From ANON - tom on December 10, 2007
    Great story, hope you intend to finish it.

    My only recommendation is to try naturalise the dialogue a little, use conjunctions where possible. Basically before writing a line, say it in your head.

    Anyway, dont take what i said too harshly, other than that the story is great.

    tom
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  • From amyfeddy on December 09, 2007
    Please post more soon, this tension is too much to take
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  • From ANON - Seiryu_chojin69 on December 06, 2007
    Nice Chapter, I like that your pacing this story very well, Please Update and soon. Stories of longing are the best to relate to and just in general are awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ColdWaterFairy on December 05, 2007
    Hot!
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  • From ANON - Adriana on December 04, 2007
    Congrats! I'm in love with this story already hehe keep up the good work!
    more please! =)
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  • From missmonet on December 01, 2007
    damn that was good please please continue. does harry ever dump that slut ginny
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  • From ANON - mariteri on November 30, 2007
    Nice start. I have to wonder what's going on with Ginny. Separate beds? Something more is going on here. Great work and please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kristin on November 30, 2007
    I would recommend putting this on Portkey you'd probably get a lot more reviews as this is a very well written story with a nice developed plot. just a consideration.
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  • From amyfeddy on November 19, 2007
    I want more, I've always been a harry/hermione shipper.
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  • From ANON - Maren on November 18, 2007
    Well, you've definitely caught my interest. I can't wait to see what's coming up next.
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  • From ANON - Kristin on November 17, 2007
    More soon it was a great chapter. Really well written as well. Please update soon.
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