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Reviews for Destroying the Heart of the family

By : JaceDamian23
  • From ANON - Alex on July 14, 2010
    Are you ever going to write more?
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  • From ANON - anonymous on November 25, 2007
    I think this could be a really good story if you would get someone to beta read it. Good start!
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  • From gorgeousbowneyes on November 19, 2007
    OK the first chapter confused me, but I'm guessing as the story develops it will be explained. Secondly, I loved the second chapter! I thought the blond haired man was Lucius, and for some reason that's who I presumed him to be all the way through as I was reading the chapter, but maybe I'm wrong? Only your AN alerted me to the fact that it might not be him.
    "The blonde bit his lip and moaned silently the whole time Professor Snape was spanking him." As I read this, I read it as "Professor Spank" the first time round and as soon as I thought it I was like, damnit it I mean "Professor Snape" and then I couldn't stop giggling. Professor Spank indeed. Well that line was just after the 14 slaps, so can you blame me? (Yes I counted the amounts of SLAP's there were, including the big slap at the end, how pitiful)

    LOL. OK so please update, I really liked it and I'd like to see more. I'll also be heading to ur profile to see what else you have!! Talk to you next chapter,
    ~gorgeousbowneyes
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