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Reviews for Peace at Last

By : CadiFach
  • From cynsharry on March 11, 2008
    please write more
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  • From DarkKat on February 21, 2008
    I really like this story. It's different then other stories that are similar to it. I can't wait to read more.
    I will be keeping my eye out to see if you updated. I hope you do so very soon.

    AR
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  • From voldemortsgrl on January 18, 2008
    this is really good so far. Update soon.
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  • From LostPetunia on January 13, 2008
    I think you have worked in every cliche to date, so congrats on that. You have too many ideas and you are rushing them. There is no backstory, no explaination, everything just happens in the least original of ways. You started out with a really good concept but you were too intent on mixing in every nifty thing you've every read to deliver a good read.
    Unbloomed
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  • From altoforensics on January 08, 2008
    forgive me for my earlier review, your story is absolutely wonderful.I love the whole founders coming out of the frame and salizar turning out to be a softie. perfect. your tom seems to be a bit soft, but it fits (the thought of that face in tears it slightly hilarious, though you haven't said if it's his snake face or his human one). i absolutely love your silent until they've made their minds up slytherins. i can picture that. especially snape, though i am rather partial to him. definately need to continue, and i'm glad i pushed past the hyper-speak finally. one question though: where's draco!?
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  • From abkani666 on December 22, 2007
    i love this story please update please pretty please
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  • From Vittani on December 20, 2007
    brilliant chapter, cant wait for the next one. Poor Harry.
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  • From altoforensics on December 10, 2007
    I love your idea, I think you need a beta though. I would love to continue reading it, but as Harry is explaining thing, you have incredibly long run on sentences. For example:


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  • From Jan on December 09, 2007
    WOW! I am loving this story!

    When it comes to Hermione's pairing, I think you should put her with Ron, and put Draco with the twin's.

    Please update chapter 11 soon. ^_^

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  • From Vittani on December 09, 2007
    good chapter. poor harry. I so love salazar Slytherin. Oh and the defence that got sirius, brilliant.
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  • From Snakelette on December 08, 2007
    I'm liking this story a lot! More please?

    As for pairings: I'd love to see Hermione with the twins and maybe Draco with Ginny or Blaise (or both ;3 gotta love threesomes)
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  • From alma on December 08, 2007
    good chapter.
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  • From dianahuntresss on December 06, 2007
    While the beginning of your story sounds a lot like another I started reading yours is much better written and further along. I like the pairing you've chosen for Harry and can't wait to see it fall into place. As for your question about who should Hermione be paired with... How are you going to be playing Ron? If you go with his usual attitude - all slytherings are evil and anyone connected to them is as well then he won't work for Hermione. He would never accept her being tom's daughter... he'd also turn on Harry the moment he found out he lusted or loved Snape and was friends with a Malfoy. The Twins on the other hand are more open minded and I wouldn't be suprised if the hat hadn't originally tried to put them in Slyterin so either or both of them would work. Draco would be harder to fit in... he's spent the better part of 6 years denigrating and bad mouthing Hermione (yes for something that is only partly true but still true as tom is a half-blood... you didn't say wether her mother was a witch or not .. this means at worst Hermione is only 1/4 and at best 3/4 wizarding blood) that's a lot of bad history to overcome. I don't think he would work. He can become a very good friend and even somewhat protective of her but I don't see them doing much by way of intimate relationships. (JMHO)
    Can't wait to see your next update.

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  • From carmel on December 05, 2007
    hi, i love your story. I think Hermoine should be with Draco. They make a lovely pair. I hope you update soon!!
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  • From GrouchyDaughter on December 04, 2007
    Fred and George!!!
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