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Reviews for The Secrets We Keep

By : Phreakdom
  • From ANON - Fate-Angel on March 05, 2009
    Oh, very nice. Hot, but with just enough emotion and angst to make it seem realistic.
    Good Work
    =^-^=
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  • From hauntoftwilight on November 28, 2008
    Sad that they have to hide their relationship.
    twilight_mouri@yahoo.com
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  • From LaBibliographe on September 16, 2008

    I thought I had visited your page before and seen no stories. Hmmm. I think I see now what was missing from my pegging chapter. There was only one peg LOL.

    This one-shot was descriptive, showing us their physical reactions. I got the further sense that their intimacy was perhaps only beginning. They agreed on their attraction, yet there was still an oddly remote sense to them as if neither of them was sure of the other, or they didn't yet know quite how they worked as a couple outside the bedroom. I see that the twosome had to be secret, but they seemed perhaps divided by that secrecy. It was keeping them from truly belonging with each other. If that makes any sense. If I keep on, this review will be longer than the story LOL.

    The writing was really excellent. I'll check more of your stories later and probably take notes!


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  • From luvhp on March 19, 2008
    Damn, that's one hell of a secret! Very well written, very hot. Your descriptions are well done, makes you really feel what's going on between the two.
    Off to check out more of your delicious talent.
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  • From Jilliane on November 26, 2007
    This was your first fic? Great job! Short, sweet, and to the point. Slightly bittersweet, but not maudlin. Perfect. Hope you continue writing; I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
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  • From LostPetunia on November 25, 2007
    Typically I'm not a fan of short sotries but your's said what it needed to. Actually overall I was more impressed with your style of writing and the way you used your words than the story. It was a good read and I look foward to being able to read more of your works. Happy writing!
    Unbloomed.
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  • From ANON - tausili on November 24, 2007
    I liked this a lot, it was short but it got the message across and really gets your attention.
    If this is your first, I can't wait for your second. :]
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  • From MWolf on November 24, 2007
    Wow! Thoroughly enjoyed myself while reading this! Your use of words creates beautiful imagery and adds to the power of reading. Fabulous work!
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  • From alma on November 24, 2007
    Good story, bittersweet.
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  • From Extraho on November 24, 2007
    i love it!!! it was short, very sweet and just perfect.
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