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Reviews for The Afterlife and Times of Myrtle Potter

By : NormanCharles
  • From G3ae on December 02, 2017

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  • From Annecia89 on June 24, 2015
    I loved this effing story!
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  • From caboose5083 on September 08, 2009
    Another great, liked how original it was. Good idea with all the kissed and the rehabilitation. Overall great story, keep writing them and sure as hell ill keep reading them.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on January 22, 2009
    Great story!
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  • From Vilkath on October 26, 2008
    Intersting start, I especialy like the flashbacks to Myrtle's early life/unlife. It's a long standing grudge but I do have to always question why Ron would be given any kind of authority in battle. So he plays chess, big deal? Some the most brilliant military minds in history do well at chess, but that doesn't mean every one who does well in chess is a military genius. Plus Ron mostly shown playing with school kids, wizardsa t that, people not known for being overly bright. Plus the chaos or real battle doesn't fit well into chess with it's rules and restrictions. You know how each piece will move, and even a pawn could kill a king in chess. Nothing like that in real life, just because a first year got up to voldemort doesn't mean the kid could kill him, nor do most the death eaters be expected parad in little lines.
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  • From Phoenix2000 on April 28, 2008
    I must say that I truly enjoyed this story. It is totally different from any other H/Hr ship or any other HP fic I have read. Very good work.
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  • From Prongs1977 on March 13, 2008
    WOW! WOW! WOW! Great story!
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  • From Prongs1977 on March 13, 2008
    Well, aren't ALL worthy bikes kick started?
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  • From SSJ04Mewtwo on February 16, 2008
    Rushed ending, but good none the less. Hope to see more stories like this one and Issues. :)
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  • From pfeil on February 16, 2008
    Excellent work.

    Their daughter is a nice touch.

    Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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  • From doorock42 on February 15, 2008
    I very much enjoyed reading this story, a welcome departure from the fanfic I normally read.

    If I might be honest, a few things jumped out at me:

    * Everything seemed too easy once Harry defeated Voldemort. He didn't seem to have to really fight for anything.

    * The sex was good and hot, but would benefit from revision in some of the wording (ie, "blue steel boner").

    Still, the idea of Myrtle taking over Hermione and the ensuing dementor/essensential arc was very interesting. I admit I got a bit confused when Noir split into two child-versions of herself but that didn't bother me.

    Overall, I quite liked it and definitely waited restlessly for updates.
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  • From SSJ04Mewtwo on February 10, 2008
    ead all of the chapters when I first saw this story. I would put 'Issues' just a hair above this one 'cause of how many women Harry ended up with. This Mewtwo will be waiting on the next chapter.
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  • From evildante0205 on February 07, 2008
    this is great its really well written great story line
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  • From doorock42 on February 05, 2008
    Just finished Chapter 12. Ever since the scene with the dementor, I've sort of had a feeling this was coming. Now I can't wait to see how we get Hermione back, and how Myrtle took her over.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 01, 2008
    I never liked Fudge...he was a dick. good job.
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