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Reviews for Hidden in Plain Sight

By : Katay
  • From jenlaranja on September 05, 2008
    OMG! I lovee your story, it's just so different, Lucius and Hermione keeping it a secret. I hope you will be updating soon, because I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good job :D
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  • From Ithilwen on August 18, 2008
    Oh this is a great story!

    I hope you will finish it!!!

    Since I would love to see what the reactions will be when the two men come too again lol.
    And yeah, I think they should be afraid the witch they just made cry. And possibly her Husband!!

    Update SOON!
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  • From DB1 on August 03, 2008
    @21. oh wow i love that they finally know but i cant wait to see their reactions. i love the story!! update soon!!

    *DB*
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  • From smmz79 on August 01, 2008
    OMG what an awesome way for them two to find out and here i was thinking that she would tell them over dinner.... great job... oh i can not wait to hear what happens next.... great job
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  • From Citten on July 31, 2008
    well i loved the last two chapters! i really loved the quick review of how things developed between the two and i would have love to have seen more! (stupid owls.) well i love the whole last chapter EVERYTHING! i am really looking forward to reading the next chapter!!!! :)
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  • From Citten on July 31, 2008
    Boy I am laugh so hard right now!!! Boy I really hope that hermione and lucius make plans for this evening! :) that would just be the icing on the cake! I just bet you can come up with a thousand was to make the next couple of chapters go
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 31, 2008
    This was interesting. I liked the way that Hermione and Lucius' marriage was revealed to Harry and Ron. I can't believe that Harry thought that she was dating George. I look forward to reading more to see what happens.
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  • From chickaboo on July 31, 2008
    Oh and the cat's out of the bag! What a way for Harry and Ron to find out eh? Walking in on them in flagrante delicto. Oh man. That's got to be worse than walking in on your parents. lol Great update, I really can't wait for your next update!!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on July 31, 2008
    O.O *plays with the kitties freshly let out of the bag*

    That... could not have gone much worse. Poor Hermione, her friends don't even know a thing about her.
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  • From carha on July 30, 2008
    OMG how could you leave us hanging there?!?!? Please update again soon!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 30, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more to see what happens when Harry raids Malfoy Manor.
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  • From smmz79 on July 30, 2008
    yeah another chap.... and areally nice one too... you kind of summed it all up for us up until present day.... and you left on a cliffie!!!!! very nice..... anyways please updaye again!!!!!!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on July 30, 2008
    That is easily the cutest proposal I've ever seen. Trust that bastard to have innocent little Teddy spring a huge question like that on her to see her reaction. Excellent.

    Can't wait to see when the cat gets let out of the bag! Oh hell, you've got a whole sackful of cats to let out and I want to see every last one. I love your writing style, and can't wait for more.
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  • From StarKneazle on July 30, 2008
    More! I adore this fic and I look for more all the time. I just wanted to let you know that I am still a faithful reader of this fic and I love it to pieces so don't stop writing.
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  • From smmz79 on July 30, 2008
    Oh wow this is going to be good.... i bet hermione is going to be pissed and they are in for a big surprise when they find out... oh please update soon i can not wait to see what happens
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