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By : Katay
  • From Sylvyr on July 29, 2008
    MUST UPDATE MORE! I'm so addicted to this story!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on July 29, 2008
    Ooh, you've got me hooked! I can't wait to see what Harry and Ron's reactions will be to Hermione's marital status. I also can't wait to see Lucius's reaction to Hermione's health; I get the feeling that, even after 15-16 years of marriage, she still hasn't told him. Your descriptions are excellent, and you do a wonderful job keeping everyone in character. I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From carha on July 29, 2008
    Yay finally another chapter. Wow, they might actually find out about Hermione and Lucius. Can't wait to see where this goes. Please update again soon!!!
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  • From chickaboo on July 29, 2008
    Uh-oh. I have a feeling that Hermione's secret isn't going to be a secret much longer. LOL Great update, I can't wait for more!!
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  • From wishywashy on July 29, 2008
    please tell me they catch H and L in bed together in the next chapter? i can't wait to find out.
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  • From Larrabee on July 29, 2008
    God! They are so stupid. But I don't know which is worse their blind forgiveness of Ron's transgressions or their dismissal of Hermione's life. I can't wait to see them raid The Malfoys, hoopefully, during a quiet night at home. I bet that when Harry sees them together he is going to go all melodramtic and accuse Hermione of doing something to him by being with his enemy. They don't deserve her.

    BLA! I am MAD! What an annoying little twot! I can't wait for more.

    All the best.
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  • From Citten on July 03, 2008
    well that was fun!!!! now how is she ever going to tell him without it breaking her heart? well i can only imagion what lucius will think and i am dying to know and soon i do hope! :)
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  • From tambrathegreat on July 02, 2008
    I was so glad to see you were back. I hope everything is going well now. Great build up to the final scene.

    Poor Harry, he hasn't got a clue.
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  • From soldiersgirl0709 on July 02, 2008
    I really enjoyed this so far. Sometimes it gets rough bouncing between the time periods, but reading slowly helps. =) I find it interesting that the legal documents were kept hidden regarding the marriage, figured the press would be all over something like that. I look forward to seeing how it all comes together.


    Happy Writing!
    ~SG~
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  • From smmz79 on July 01, 2008
    yeah you updated... great chap.... i wonder how lucius will take the news of hermiones condition? great tension with harry... him insinuating one thing while she was on a totally different train of thought.... i loved the beginning when she had a flash back of ron that was funny... great ending too very steamy!!!!
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 01, 2008
    This was a great chapter. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From LaBibliographe on June 25, 2008
    Chapter 12: Oh, I very much like the picture you drew of Lucius and Hermione in bed just before the alarm went off. He
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  • From RhiannonoftheMoon on June 21, 2008
    I'm not sure why I didn't start this fic earlier - perhaps I expected some tawdry secret love story full of lies and deceit. I certainly didn't expect a thoughtful, somewhat bittersweet post-war fic. The characters are very human, and their struggles are realistic. Fantastic job - I don't think I've read a LM/HG like it.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 20, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From carha on June 20, 2008
    Yay another chapter. Great work. Looking forward to reading more from you!
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