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Reviews for Hidden in Plain Sight

By : Katay
  • From Heidi191976 on December 02, 2007
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From chickaboo on December 02, 2007
    Oh you wicked wicked thing you! What a way to leave us! PLEASE update soon!
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  • From Malfoysgirl on December 02, 2007
    Wow great job! I wonder who the father is? Please add more
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  • From ffpoisongirl on December 02, 2007
    Oh... SNAP. THAT was a twist I didn't expect. Now, in most cases I don't really like when a person splits apart a canon couple by making one of them completely inconsiderate, but Ron really is a prat, and Hermione doesn't seem to have the patience to deal with him. Honestly, I don't see what they have in common, and you seem to be of the same opinion. You show it really well.

    I assume that this is the death knell for Ron and Hermione's relationship; that'll happen. I can't wait to see what's wrong with Hermione, how she and Lucius will be brought together, when she'll get a real position, and right now, I especially want to see George recover, even a little. This is very well-written, and I'll be anxiously awaiting the next installment.
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  • From DB1 on December 02, 2007
    @7 a great chapter, update soon

    *DB*
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  • From StarKneazle on December 01, 2007
    This story is extremely well written and double yay! for being DH complaint!! I'd actually been lookig for a story like this, one that was DH complaint and had Hermione with a Malfoy... so it works, right? Good job. I was sad to see that you only have 7 chapters up so hurry along and go write some more!
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  • From chickaboo on December 01, 2007
    I love this story. Go Hermione on the French! Take that Lucius. lol Can't wait to read more!
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 01, 2007
    This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From LaBibliographe on December 01, 2007
    Chapter 7: I like that Lucius and Hermione have a ways to go before they approach a tentative friendship, let alone any romance. This is much more believable. He is a rather arrogant snob so far, isn
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 26, 2007
    This is a great story. I can't wait to read more soon.
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  • From Citten on November 25, 2007
    okay i have just found your story i dont know how i missed it! well...i just love the story!!! :) i am so looking forward to a lot more i am so enjoying it and i love lucius and hermione they are so much fun to play with and i really cant wait to see how draco takes things :)(to bad i cant do a sly smile) question how long have lucius and hermione been married? and will you eventually tell us? please do take too long to update i am really looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
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  • From DB1 on November 25, 2007
    @6 good story i hope to read more soon

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  • From ffpoisongirl on November 25, 2007
    I must say, I'm impressed. I've been hoping for a DH-compliant fan fiction that didn't exclusively put Ron and Hermione together; while I'm sure they'd be a cute "high school" couple, between the lack of common interests, completely different personalities and their ugly arguments I never saw it working out.

    I like the style you've used, the flashback format. It adds depth to the story, letting us know that things eventually end well - except we don't know the friends' reactions to the union - but still leaves room for the reader to be intrigued. Also, bringing up the very real issue of the age difference - not just Lucius angsting about it but actually having it shown late at night - is a great touch. Though, to be honest, if he only has this problem after three times in one night, I'm pretty sure he doesn't have much to worry about.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 25, 2007
    Chapters 1-5: Well-written and very entertaining. So far the tale seems mostly character-driven which I always enjoy. I think I'm hanging onto the shifts in time. I assume neither Hermione nor Lucius has announced their marriage (of fifteen years?) to anyone? Draco is returning and things will escalate I guess. If Hermione has been hiding her marriage for 15 years from her friends, how did she do that? Does everyone think she's Lucius' secretary? I'm a bit confused about that.

    It's very interesting. I appreciate the good grammar and punctuation.
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    Ch. 4 - one word - coarse should be course. "...she felt the shiver of awareness coarse through his body."
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  • From Malfoysgirl on November 25, 2007
    Awesome story! Please add more soon
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