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By : Aera
  • From dristi on January 02, 2009
    hi, liked it very much and the part with gw is very interesting...hope to read more soon about dm's torture and gw's perversion...

    keep up and pls update soon...
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  • From Mellow03 on August 19, 2008
    Hello, good chapter. I am wondering did you read the feed back I put there, two last feedback and will put one of my idea into your story base on two feedback?? New one: for Ginnya, can have her to have sex with her brother. Not just cock-obession, but anal-enjoyment: inside and out to play with it. How long will you put next chapter?? I have a story that you could write from the story that you read in my author page. It is Mellow03. It has two story that is same, but other is more dirty and it is trio with Ginny. A long story from 30,000 to more.
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  • From angelnomiko on August 11, 2008
    that was great.. please update soon ... later for now

    angel
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  • From RyuaAlba on December 16, 2007
    Hot. Very hot. You should really really continue this.... very lovely story!
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  • From Mellow03 on December 15, 2007
    Hi, good story on chapter two. Can you make Draco clean the trio up, the whole thing, with his mouth, not with materials and cleaning charms. Clean it out and suck it out since what was in must come out. Can make a suprise that trio is dirty as the trio make Draco dirty with the Trio? Hope would make into a story and have Ginny know about it. Can put angst? I know this is a story, but it is seemingly an one shot story, but plot story, a long one. Keep it up with the story.
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  • From bananasforyou on December 14, 2007
    omg poor thing. haha ginny
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 14, 2007
    hehe...you're a sick little puppy....me likes...poor Draco...go a little deeper into it and update quicker : )
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  • From Mellow03 on November 30, 2007
    Hi, good story and hope will become a story, not one shot kind. And the four somes, but combinated of four somes, not just to Draco, but other trio too. I mean the trio to have fun with each other. All the conbination, willing, which it will be eventually after now it is not willing from Draco. More torture stuff and maybe dirty stuff too from torture. Good story.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 27, 2007
    This is just like another fic called Golden Sin hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600008810&chapter=1. I'm not saying you stole the idea but it would be great if you would flesh it out and continue it and finish it unlike that author who appears to have abandoned it. I like the idea of the good guys going bad and making Draco pay...
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  • From bananasforyou on November 25, 2007
    wow thats awesome!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on November 25, 2007
    OHHHH its so hot! A dirty foursome! keep going!
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