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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From GreenEyedCat on February 03, 2008
    Who would have thought that sacrificing yourself could be used to run away. Harry's mind is so twisted sometimes. How can suicide seems to be the easy way out. O.o
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  • From ANON - Zet on February 02, 2008
    It would be a fucking awesome ending if Draco ended up in the maze forever with Harry by his side though, immortal through time but happy somehow with each other.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 02, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 24! Harry is going to do something stupid! I just know he is!
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  • From QueenB on February 02, 2008
    Ch. 23 In spite of how Harry tries to console Draco, I have to admit that Richard has a point. He's not insane, just insanely motivated. As Harry said, if he were truly mad, he would have had traitors among his band just as Voldemort had traitors among his. But Draco did something terrible to that boy without a command or specific orders. I believe Nietzsche once said, "Whoever fights monsters should see to it that in the process he does not become a monster. And when you look into the abyss, the abyss also looks into you." If and when Draco ever wins free of the maze, he's going to have a tough time defending himself before the Ministry.


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  • From QueenB on February 02, 2008
    Ch. 22 I could imagine if the prisoners might want to pass into death if it meant the difference between that and more torture at the hands of the Unspeakables. I suppose that would count as willing death, even if it is the choice between a lesser evil and a greater one.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 02, 2008
    Poor Draco. And that boy he murdered? It was all show...but he's not really like them right? He's just really good at hiding his emotions behind a mask. I hate RIchard for making Draco like this. Oh well. Nice chapter! Update soon!
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  • From X5927alpha on February 02, 2008
    This is a damn good story that I just got around to reading...but I want MORE. Please.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 02, 2008
    Richard is a VERY convincing speaker because when he said
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  • From misslala on February 02, 2008
    Is this going to be a tragedy?

    Not that I'm adverse to them, but after everything, I'd hate to see them suffering more. I don't know what to expect; I'm just along for the ride, hoping that whatever happens, at least one of them comes out happy. The middle of the maze is slowly creeping in, and I wonder what we will find there along with Harry and Draco. Everything seems to be twisting high in tension again as they haven't run into anything painful for a while, but I don't envy them.

    Seeing the truth of things is difficult for both of them, I'm sure. Harry's back and forth on what he wants is heart wrenching as well as noble, but I hope that he figures it out soon. Even if they make it out, I can't see Draco letting him go easily. Whatever courage he lacked before, I think he's gained in some way with his time with Harry. I wonder what makes Harry see? The time progression couldn't have them in love already, but I think they both are bordering on feeling quite a bit for one another. I'm excited to see how it all plays out. :)Another excellent chapter. Thanks for sharing.
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  • From DannyLove on January 30, 2008
    wow I mean really wow I'm addicted ^^ love how it's all going. Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Toddy on January 30, 2008
    I like your story, a bit bloody at times, but gripping. I do hope you will continue it.
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  • From misslala on January 30, 2008
    What an excellent way to include Sirius and the Veil. I was wondering if it would come along at some point. I like Harry's little revelations through out the chapters. Each one builds on the last, even when they contradict one another, and it's fabulous to read. Will they find out how long they were down there by the end? I can imagine that the days are really flooding together the way they are moving around in there. I absolutely adore this story! :D It keeps me on my toes, and even in the horror they find something to comfort one another, or have one another. The struggle that Harry underwent with wanting to join Sirius was true to what we've seen from him in canon; it's that desire to have family and those he loves surrounding him. I love his comment to Draco about thinking of ways to hurt Richard and how handsome he looked. He didn't even think of it as being out of place for a change, at least not that you showed us, and I'm sure that was very intentional on your part. :P Can't wait for the next update. I've posted the link to the story on a few recommendation threads. :) I love this story.
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  • From ANON - rAiNwAtEr on January 30, 2008
    And the plot thickens. Me oh my. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - ha-chan on January 30, 2008
    Wow . .. how utterly disturbing .. some parts are really distgusting, you bring this horror direct in my room xD I think I never read such an amazing H.P horrorstory. You did a really good job on it I wonder how this will end, somehow I've a bad feeling, but I hope that Ron & Hermione are still alive. This one I think is one of your best stories so far in my opinion^^
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 30, 2008
    How can anyone be so cruel?
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