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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From DBZVelena on January 30, 2008
    Wow, they must be getting close to the center of the maze now hu?
    Could you mention the letters from the altars again? at least up to where we are. Pretty please?
    I'm very much loving this story, its written very professionally.
    If you ever wanted to be a writer for a living, I'm sure you could be very successful.
    Please update soon.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 29, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 23!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on January 29, 2008
    Poor Harry.....was it really Sirius? Or was Draco telling the truth? I don't know! Only Harry saw Sirius! Wahhhh! Please update soon!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 29, 2008
    OH MAN! So their trust has been solidified and tested for real this time. This is definitely a major milestone in their relationship and I love the last line to this chapter. It was nice to see Harry needing Draco to shield him for a change. The whole veil thing was a total mind fuck for Harry, poor thing. I hope Harry doesn't have to face an more dead relatives and friends because seeing his parents would be too much I think. I hope Sirius is in a better place and that what he was saying wasn't even half true. Now I'm really curious to see what Harry's plan is because it can't be what I thought it was.
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  • From ANON - landra on January 29, 2008
    hey there!
    I think your story is great!! it is the perfect mix of dark and other ^^!!! I really hope you're updating very, very soon!!!
    lan
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 28, 2008
    OK, I change my previous comments..the flesh eating dog things are by far the worst yet. I had to walk away from my computer several times during that..thanks! lol. Richard is a first class asshole and I hope we will see some sort of torture or at least justice delivered to him. Draco is indeed a soldier and I can't believe he's not totally nutters by now. I hope Harry can keep his promise too, but it sounds like his plan may not allow for that? man, I'm gonna have nightmares tonight...love it : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 28, 2008
    two chapters behind and catching up ::panting:: what the hell is going on with Harry's shadow..OK, now that would be some really freaky shit if his own shadow attacks them. Can't wait to see what all of that was about. I agree with Draco, anytime you hear bad stuff about you from your closest friends and it doesn't really faze you, then that's pretty sad. I can see Ron and Hermione saying some of those things..but it doesn't seem like Hermione would say that stuff about helping him out. I hope not anyway. So Draco was obsessed with Harry...that's kinda cute, I wonder how long that went on. Their little tender moments are really intimate and feel real. I'm rooting for a happy ending even though you kinda already answered my question in the negative...I still have hope.
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  • From DannyLove on January 28, 2008
    yesssss more plese was verry good
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  • From ANON - curly88 on January 28, 2008
    Hi I was wonderig how many pensieves there are compared to draco's ribs? Are there 9? I love you story, but one last question: how far our we in the story at chapter 21, halfway?
    Thanks
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  • From misslala on January 28, 2008
    Wow. This is one of the most emotionally charged chapters yet. At least for me it was. The way that Harry felt for the first time why he was the one that Draco would want to cling to, the way he accepted that "duty". God. I had some tears there at the end when he promised he wouldn't leave him. That's awful what they did to Draco. To make him no one...

    I still think that them tying Draco up that they knew someone was going to come to investigate. I'm really hating this Richard character. He's a bastard.

    This is such a great story. I feel so bad for both Draco and Harry. I hope that they will get out of this madness soon! Can't wait for the next update, hon. Thanks for being so consistant and wonderful. You provide me with quite a bit of entertainment. :D
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on January 28, 2008
    Draco's voice, its at the center of the maze isn't it.
    And Harry will get it back for Draco and with it his soul.
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  • From ANON - Kayo on January 28, 2008
    I really enjoyed this chapter too...but the spiders, ugh, good but I was cringing. Sob. I want a a happy ending (a happyish ending, maybe?) I don't want Harry to implement is plan that will not allow him to leave with draco! XD But keep writing!
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on January 28, 2008
    How do you do it? You pump out chapters insanely fast.
    Only two more pensives to go. I can't wait to see what kinds of memories will unravel.
    I wonder what the Unspeakables needed Draco's voice for. Did they think that by using Draco's voice they could falsely give themselves the primision they needed to make Draco the 'willing' sacrifice? Is that what went wrong?
    And another thing, When Harry and Draco finaly get to the center of the maze, What will happen? The maze has obviouly gone horrible wrong, so they won't become immortal when they reach the center, and if that is the case what will become of them instead?
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  • From alleycat88 on January 28, 2008
    Poor draco. why did they need to enter his soul to take his voice? And whats gpoing to happen whne they finally get through all the pensives? Oooo! I'm excited! Thanks for the update!
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 28, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 22! Why swallow Draco's voice? What did Robert need it for?
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