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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From rAiNwAtEr on January 27, 2008
    I can't believe how quickly you can write and dish out chapters. It is astonishing to say the least. I can't wait for another chapter. I only hope Ron and Herm. are still alive.

    Please continue!
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  • From lissagal99 on January 27, 2008
    That flicker of movement is scaring me... like the mouse in my house.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 27, 2008
    I'm sure that Harry's last thoughts will come back to hunt him.

    Oh and Harry being normal and ordinary ...sure he he ;-)
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  • From QueenB on January 27, 2008
    Ch. 20 Draco may have suffered from censorship from his father. But as a Slytherin Prince, he's learned to let no one and nothing stand in his way. He's never suffered real blows to his self esteem so hasn't learned to deal with them. Harry's "sad life" as he calls it has inured the Gryffindor to such things and, conversely, made him stronger for it. Suffering from the Dursleys, fighting off Voldemort and his henchmen, dealing with the unwanted press, struggling through his studies and the tongue lashings of Snape (!) and learning to deal with his own temper have toughened Harry without dampening his spirit. That comes through beautifully here.

    The whole concept of the Maze continues to be a triumph of suspense, surprise and insight. What a masterly effort.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 26, 2008
    What was hiding in the shadows? I sooo need chapter 21!!!
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  • From ANON - Kayo on January 26, 2008
    Thank you for adding me! Right now I can only wonder 1) what is that shadow, obvious to us readers it's /something/. 2) has Draco always been obsessed with Potter, even out of school? and 3) did Ron and Hermione really say those things? Hm. I suspect 2 and 3 are yes, and that 1 is something nasty. But I'm happy for the update!
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  • From misslala on January 26, 2008
    You know, I often find it highly amusing that Harry tried to force the spotlight away, but it always found him anyway in canon. I adore how you have integreated some of the past into this, Draco's life shaped around HArry in some way and his reactions to him. Lucius and Narcissa's moment was interesting, and I'm so very curious what the hell is following Harry's shadow or hiding in Harry's shadow. I'm also damn curious about Draco's reaction to Harry waking. He knows that Harry is struggling with his sexuality, so why is he trying to continue intiating intimacy? Is it ujust his need to be accepted by someone? I am really interested to see if this is going to have a happy/hopeful ending. I noticed a bit of Harry's conflicting ideas about Draco this chapter. At first, he was torn between knowing that Draco could never redeem himself, to saying he isn't evil, even if he didn't like what Draco had done in the past. So was it him saying something to make Draco feel better, or was it a matter of showing how people's minds can quickly change based on circumstance alone?
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  • From ANON - Kayo on January 26, 2008
    First, please add me to the update list. Second, I read this story in two sittings /only/ because I had to go to school. Third, this is a really good story. It's obvious you've time and effort into this, and the characters (their personalities, natures, however you say it) are complex and layered (thank god! and not static but dynamic, too). I don't usually read anything horror-ish but I've read some of your oneshots (and fell in love), and so gave this a try. I'm glad I did! Unfortunately there's so much I want to say/comment on, but I can't remember it all! Just, please keep writing and updating (you have talent), and it's been marvelous and amazing (even when I was squirming at the squickiness) and I wish Harry wasn't so delusional (but it wouldn't be as fun if he weren't) and Draco has such cute(!) moments throughout the story. And, that was a really bad run on sentence, but maybe it will help to effectively convey my emotions. And, just because it popped into my head, you really don't need a beta. Your writing is skilled enough, and I don't remember any real glaring grammatical or spelling-related problems. Mmm...and any other compliments/comments I had while reading have Apparated from my brain (sorry!). So a general, wow this is amazing please update and I will loyally keep reviewing! will have to do. ^____^ /
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on January 25, 2008
    This story is absolutely crude, and disgustingly scary, and.......I LOVE it. I have never read a fanfic so in graved with scenes of horror and actually wanted to continue reading. Once again you have pulled a mind blowing story from your muse bag. I NEED more. I crave to know what has happened to R&H. What other secrets wil be revealed by the maze. As always, I am hoping for a happy ending. Draco and Harry deserve at least that after everything they have been through.
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  • From DannyLove on January 24, 2008
    Yay! whoot! go harry and draco! lol love this chapter! can't wait for more!
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  • From QueenB on January 24, 2008
    Ch. 19 I'm glad that Harry was able to articulate his feelings. Draco voiced a few of the objections that I've had to Harry's chosen outlook about his sexual orientation. But Harry is also thinking about the big picture and I think that's the right thing to do. He's thinking about the future, about what will happen when their ordeal is over. Harry's right to worry that whatever relationship he forges with Draco might not last once they're free from their current dilemma. They also can't waste time smooching when there's danger all around them.

    Of course, Draco has the opposite opinion because he's in the opposite position. He's been lonely and injured for so long. He'd probably given up hope that he would see another person, much less be rescued; he can be forgiven for wanting to snatch whatever comfort he can before the worst happens.

    All in all, this chapter hit upon all the unspoken issues lying between these two men and expressed it very accurately indeed. It was perfectly written; I could even foresee Draco's name-calling when Harry tries to explain why he thinks he can change how he feels about men! :P

    Great work.

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  • From alleycat88 on January 23, 2008
    Very hot! And all they did was kiss! Draco needs to get his priorities straight...erm...pun not intended! Poor Harry one kiss and BAM he is like a lovestruck kid. And poor Draco...apparently sex is akin to breathing in his book! Hahahahahaha! nice chapter! Thanks!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 23, 2008
    I bet that we can blame the Dursleys for Harry's problems. But I think we can trust his slytherin to show him what he should have learned. ;-)
    They are so cute even if Harry is stupid :-)
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 23, 2008
    Nicely done! I just hope he's not setting them both up for some major heartbreak. I sooo need chapter 20!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on January 23, 2008
    Yay!!!! It's about damn time : ) Harry needs a smack upside the head still. I hope he's not going to do anything really bad to save Draco's life. That line about Draco not wanting him after he does what he has to do worries me. Lord knows what you have planned but I hope it doesn't work! I know this is a horror story but I'm putting my bid in for a happily ever after for these guys. lol@ Harry trying to convince himself he's giving into Draco for the other boy's own good...lol
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