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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From misslala on January 23, 2008
    I am always so amused when Harry fights his feelings. I'm glad that he gave in, if only momentarily to his desires. I think it might make things easier for them, an outlet, but it will also complicate matters. Another fantastic chapter. I'm looking forward to more. I know that the lull won't last long, and I can't wait to see where else you take us.
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  • From QueenB on January 22, 2008
    Ch. 18 It's tough for Draco not to understand Harry's motivations when Harry has such problems sorting them out for himself. Of course he gets upset when he reaches out for understanding and closeness and Harry rejects him. Both men are afflicted with the usual male problems when it comes to expressing tender emotions: neither one can express themselves. Heh. ;D
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  • From alleycat88 on January 22, 2008
    *shivers* sick....Draco....how could you? Excellent chapter I was both moved and disgusted by it. Update soon lovely!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 21, 2008
    That Draco was the one who made the liquids is so wrong.

    Draco is manipulating Harry even now so I don't think that he will take Harry's selfdenial well. But a real explanation would be good.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on January 21, 2008
    Maybe Harry should try to tell Draco so of his problems bescause his reactions definatly aren't easy to understand. Afterall he is an idiot, a cute idiot but still an idiot.
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  • From misslala on January 21, 2008
    Wow. It took Harry long enough to figure out why he should have tried to explain a little bit better to Draco why he had rejected him. LOL Silly Potter. Well, I'm out of qustions to ask, knowing that none of them will be answered, but I do hope that they find some common ground soon... I wonder how Draco will react to harry's revelation? Will Harry tell him that if he wanted to be gay, he would kiss him? Or will be stammer around his words as always. Anothr great updated. Looking forward to more.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 21, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 19!!! I hope Harry doesn't bungle up the explanation!
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  • From ANON - larien Miriel on January 20, 2008
    I just love this story! keep on writing, and update soon! ^-^

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  • From ANON - evalhanne on January 20, 2008
    You evil evil evil person! I'm so hooked onto this story it's become an addiction. Poor Draco . . .
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 20, 2008
    Wow..how heartbreaking...Draco has to watch himself do all of those awful things and jesus, skinning someone??? Harry needs to keep it real with him. I'm so sad for Draco for so many reasons now, and Harry's at the top of that list. He needs to get over himself and stop thinking so hard.
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  • From serpensortia on January 20, 2008
    ok, creepy but good, but creepy.
    i have no idea where your going with this
    but i still want more. can't wait for your
    next chapter.
    serpensortia
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  • From DannyLove on January 20, 2008
    aww man well oh well verry good i love it still just keeps geting interesting

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  • From serpensortia on January 19, 2008
    holy sh@#$*&%#($*&#!
    wow this story has even my messed up mind
    is going for a loop, and i love it.
    i can't wait for the next installment.
    i'd love to be added to that list of emails
    if you would be so kind at serpensortia06@gmail.com
    and don't rush it, rushing these kinds of stories
    always seems to take some of the life from them, and
    this is one of the better ones that i have ever read.
    serpen
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 18, 2008
    Most beautiful and powerful chapter yet. The whole description of Harry as light and connecting to the center that was Draco was really really beautiful, intimate, and just kickass writing! I could read that part over and over. Just glad he didn't die, I wasn't sure where you were going when you left it like that. So sad Harry isn't comfortable enough in his skin to give Draco what he and Draco both want and need right now. Just want to shake Harry throughout this story but it's also very real, the insecurity, doubt, and fear about who he is and his fears for taking advantage of Draco are just sweet, although I think he's just using that as an excuse. I hope he finds some courage soon and faces it so they can start really exploring each other.
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  • From misslala on January 18, 2008
    I feel bad for both Harry and Draco in this. Harry is so obviously struggling with his attraction and trying to be a gentleman about things, but I don't think Draco would have attempted that had he not seen something else within those combined moments. It makes me wish you were including a bit of Draco's POV in this so that we could see what he was thinking/feeling other than the subtle glimpses through Harry. We all know that he is good at mis-interpreting things. :P Another fantastic, although, heartwrenching chapter. It would be nice to see Harry not care that he's gay - I wonder what it will take for him to see there's nothing wrong with his desires for Draco. Well... if this is even the real Draco. LOL But, you haven't labelled this a tragedy, so I think it's safe to assume that it will all become clear before long.

    Another room of memories to come, something painful. I want to think that a memory of 6th year will come along before long, something that Harry can also regret. All of Draco's pain hasn't come from that maze alone; there's so much more you have left to explore, and I'm so very eager to see it in action!
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