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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From QueenB on December 22, 2007
    Ch. 9 This story is so confusing. Turning a living being into a maze, using his own fingers to form copies of himself, curses, hexes, spells--it's just so hard keeping track of anything. Hopefully, future chapters will sort out things.
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  • From QueenB on December 22, 2007
    Ch. 8 I have to admit that I'm as frustrated as Harry. A lot of this story depends on foreknowledge of subjects, objects and events mentioned in the books and I haven't read any except the first one. It's really baffling and now I'm worried about those damned knives...
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  • From QueenB on December 21, 2007
    Ch. 4 Maybe Malfoy participated in the creation of these traps. But I'm fairly sure he didn't expect to have his bones removed, his fingers cut off or his voice taken away. He was just lucky he wasn't castrated. I just hope Harry gets hold of himself long enough to realize all this. All the fanfics I've read about him so far show him to have a quick and hot temper.
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  • From QueenB on December 21, 2007
    Ch. 1 Harry is deluding himself if he thinks refraining from sleeping with men will change his sexual orientation. You're not gay because you sleep with men; you sleep with men because you're gay! What books has HE been reading that make him think otherwise?
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  • From misslala on December 21, 2007
    So now I'm starting to wonder if this Draco - the one with missing fingers/ribs is the real Draco at all. Why wouldn't Draco share his knowledge with Harry? Is it that he has to wait until Harry asks a specific question before he can? Haha I suck at figureing out what's going on, but I am completely intrigued by what is happening. I'm hoping that they end up out okay in the end. Those Malfoys were pretty crazy. I wonder how long before they start trying to eat one another. LOL Not like it would do anything to them to begin with. LOL This just keeps getting more and more intense. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From tiapotter18 on December 20, 2007
    how soon will we hear about harrys plan?
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  • From Christabell on December 19, 2007
    Great chapter :) I'm definitely glad I strayed from my usual smut and fluff!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 19, 2007
    Hmm...this is getting really mind boggling. Harry is in quite a situation. Now i'm not so sure if I trust Draco either..lol. You're doing a great job at building suspense and doubt about whats really going on. That was one of the most gripping chapters yet...did I say we could handle it previously? Maybe I spoke too soon..lol. :::shudder:::
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 19, 2007
    OMG OMG OMG...can I just tell you, I'm just 3 paragraphs into the latest chapter and I cannot, I repeat, I cannot continue reading....you're slicing my Harry up like he's a loaf of bread!! :::breathing in deeply::: I'm sorry, I just came back from seeing I Am Legend, so I'm already frazzled and then you write this twisted shit..lol. OK, going back to reading now...just had to vent a bit. I'll review more after I'm done..lol.
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  • From graballz on December 19, 2007
    oh shit oh shit oh shit

    STOP CUTTING MY HARRY!!!!! Smarmy little bastards...why do I get the feeling it'll get worse before it gets better? *gulp*

    *snicker* Draco's a handsome cock, eh? Ohhhhhhh, the innuendo!!!!!

    Harry's idea...well, if Draco had to sacrifice to create the maze, then one way to undo it would be for Draco to die, right? *whimper* Hopefully Harry has a better solution in mind than THAT...unless Draco CAN'T die because of the 'forever suffering' requirement of the maze to give someone else immortality.

    *sigh* GREAT chapter! Crazy but great. Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From graballz on December 19, 2007
    Oh god oh god oh god...I love this story so much!!! My heart starts fluttering and my stomach goes into knots when I see a new chapter! It's like an extended horror movie, and I LOVE IT.

    FUCK 10 Dracos made from his fingers? Please let them be good!Dracos...*crosses fingers*

    On the other hand, 10 Dracos??????? Uhhh, JACKPOT!!!! Hel-LO! One for me, one for Harry, one for you, one for lol get it? LMAO Okay, enough waxing about the previous chapters...*creeps off to read the latest one*
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  • From alleycat88 on December 19, 2007
    Oh no! What will they do to Draco and Harry? So if the maze doesn't work than why was Draco left there? They had to have known that the maze didn't work. draco had to have told them.And if he didnt then wy not? It would have saved him. Or did they leave him there as punishment? But then why leave the maze up with the copies of Draco and the pensieves? Please update soon!
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  • From misslala on December 18, 2007
    So was the whole point to get Harry down there in order to complete the full ritual? If so, damn they knoew Harry too well now. Wow. This keeps getitng intense. I am worried about how their relationship is going to end up working out should they ever get out of there. I can't even begin to guess what you have up your sleeve with this! LOL It's very intense. So Draco wasn't willing - they used the Imperius curse on him - but that still leaves the question of whether Draco meant to do it all. If Draco is the maze, how do they reverse it? There has to be a way. They can't be the only living people in the maze. Now I'm wondering if Kingsley knew about this, too. Why else would he completely ignore Harry's request to send someone after Draco. Shit, this is really good. It's scary in all the right ways, full of suspense and mystery. I can't way to see how this madness concludes. Especially since they end up with somewhat of a pre-slash relationship. God, keep the chapters coming! :D This is brilliant.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 18, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 9!
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  • From ANON - beautifullove348 on December 17, 2007
    Amazing chapter once again. Oh poor Draco! He just has to be saved! I love the intricitness of this plot, this story is just absolutely stunning so far.

    Can't wait for the next chapter!
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