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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 17, 2007
    omg! why was I picturing Children of the Damned in this chapter...that's too many Draco for one person to handle. Now everything is clear...what a clever plot you have going on here. How are they gonna get away, they're out numbered. On another note, I'm glad Harry has decided to trust Draco...can you give these boys a little break, some sleep, some nookie time? lol. Loved this scene, it was really creepy...
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  • From Christabell on December 17, 2007
    This is extremely different than your other writing, and in some twisted way, I really like it. I'm definitely squirming while I read it, but sometimes I think that's half the fun of reading.

    Great job so far!
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  • From Ruffner on December 17, 2007
    man where do you come up with these ideas? chapter 6 gave me the willies! Almost didn't want to go to bed. my hands got all sweaty and my stomach got all queazy. I So cannot wait for an update!
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  • From misslala on December 17, 2007
    Wow. Those snakes were something else! I think the basis of their relationship could be quite interesting in the end. Here is Harry trying to comfort Draco, but stay strong for himself through this trial and then there's the ever growing phsyical pieces that they are experiencing as well. I feel bad for both of them through this. I'm hoping that Draco feel repentant for what he's done. I'm wondering what the purpose of the Pensives are. Is it a way to remind Draco of what he did, or a means to tempt someone like Harry into using whatever power hides at the end of the maze? Is this a story where Draco really doesn't care, but he's using Harry, only allowing snippets of memory to leak through for his own purposes? I notice that Harry hasn't noticed whether Draco is still Marked or not... I have lots of theories swimming around with this one. :D Keep up the great work, hon. This is incredible.
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  • From ANON - Myra on December 16, 2007
    Oh god. That was so sad.. I feel like crying. BAHHHHHH. Poooooor Dracoooooooo. Noooo x_x!! I'd faint earlier than Draco did if I was Harry, watching the horrid scene *_*.. those people.. grrrrrrr. I despise them so so much. Draco was tricked into it, knew it! I'm so glad he didn't join them knowing what they're really doing behind the curtains. And I have no idea why, but when Harry said "I'm so, so sorry", I felt so horrible @___@.. gooooood chapter. Can't wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - js on December 16, 2007
    I like the unique plot line and the confusion that Harry's feeling right now. I'd love to find out more of what Draco's thinking and feeling through all of this.
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 16, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 8! Eight? There are more of them? Do all of them have Draco's memories? Why his?
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  • From Lacegag on December 16, 2007
    This is fantastic! It's getting better and betterbwith each chapter! I love horror and gore. So, I'm thoroughly enjoying this! I also can't wait to find out what else went on down in the DOM and where Ron and Hermione are too.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 15, 2007
    lol..you had me literally cringing with my knees drawn up and flinching after every word when I read the section about Draco's mutilation. That was horrific and brilliantly detailed. Harry can't push him away now! What I really wanna know is though if Draco whispered thank you or something else in Harry's ear. I'm a bit confused about the 8 pensieves...so they're using Draco's bones to follow the research he did, where exactly are they going, and why does this all seem like a elaborate trap? I'm very worried for them both...
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  • From misslala on December 14, 2007
    Oh, wow. Those little bone creatures are freaky! This is so tense, and I love it! :D Can't wait for more, hon.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 12, 2007
    Wow. I mean Wow. this is got to be one of the most creative stories I've read in fan fiction. The stuff you're coming up with is really wild...seriously. That last chapter was horrific. I can just picture things sucking Harry's foot bones from his skin....it's crazy that he's becoming more attracted to Draco through all of this, but then again, in intense situations things come out of people they weren't expecting. I feel so sorry for Draco but if he knew they were killing folks then not so much : ) I feel a first kiss coming on? should be interesting, just hope they both live that long....keep it coming!
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 12, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 7! A wooden block for a foot might not be a bad thing. Could use it for a weapon.
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  • From ANON - Myra on December 10, 2007
    I still don't understand why Malfoy participated in those things at the first place, but I sure do know that he regretted it, and that he didn't know it was going to be THAT bad. I hope Harry will accept that in the future. I can understand if Harry can't trust Draco for the mean time. I feel so sorry for Draco though.. Great chapter as usual.. I really almost cried, the part when Draco broke down. So sad T__T
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  • From Dreiad on December 10, 2007
    The "yawning pit of betrayal" was an incredible image, I had to stop reading and close my eyes and think about that one. Great phrasing, unique and very descriptive!
    And the "Idiot Gryffindor" was a *great* addition to the sarcasm facet hahahahahahaha! I knew there'd be insults in there somewhere!
    Very realistic how Harry wanted to make Draco go back, but now Draco is the only one who has the maze figured out, so Harry has to accept him and continue together. It does not feel forced at all, how they have to stay together through this. But aw...I sure hope Harry can trust Draco again relatively soon!
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  • From graballz on December 10, 2007
    OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD *sob* I'm so glad Harry isn't made of 'tough enough stuff' to watch Draco suffer!!!!!!!! I REALLY want to know what happened to Draco, so I'll keep reading!!!

    I'm guessing that Draco solved the puzzle with the little balls wrong, and these are the horrible, dastardly consequences? The maze...but the horrors were all inflicted by the Unspeakables? Damn...

    I'm going to try not to guess, since I'm no good at it. I just love this story and now cant' WAIT for your next update!!!!

    I finish every chapter of yours and sit in silence for a few seconds, and then think "GOD DAMN that was good!" and then I usually want to gasp and yell and scream for the way you left it (or something)

    but I'm hoping that Draco will find some way to redeem himself in Harry's eyes and that Harry will regain his trust. (Draco IS worthy of Harry's trust, right???)

    augh! Update soon! (and thank you thank you THANK YOU for updating twice today!)
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