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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From thrnbrooke on December 10, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 6!
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  • From graballz on December 10, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!!!!! TWICE!!!!! I read that Draco HELPED in creating the problem with the DoM...but that just can't be right!!! Or else something went horribly, horribly wrong, because Draco wouldn't sacrifice himself to be tortured for a year or more!!!! (Right?)

    HARRY, NO, DON'T FEEL BETRAYED!!!! I'm sure there is a good explanation for that!!!! *whimper* Draco, what is going on in that fucked-up blonde head of yours?

    Lom, I LOVE YOU FOREVER for writing this story!!!! Thank you for "going there" with "pretty damn dark and gory". I love it, even if it squicks me out...and I'll keep reading (as long as it's okay with you that I squeal in my reviews) But I hope you know that I still love it even though it's disturbing content! Or maybe I love it BECAUSE it's disturbing...

    Anyway...I'm going to read your second update and then leave you another review, since you were so kind as to post TWO chapters today!
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  • From misslala on December 09, 2007
    Hrm... I don't have any theories, and that's probably for the best. You're doing an excellent job of keeping the tension high, so I imagine that when it all comes crashing down that this should be interesting. Ah, and he's found the sarcastic phrases. LOL Brilliant. looking forward to more! haha
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  • From bananasforyou on December 09, 2007
    THAT LITTLE SHIT KNOWS the way out. damn him. nice chap!
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  • From misslala on December 09, 2007
    Gah! It's so obvious that Draco would be involved in some way. Hrm. That definately puts a major twist in things. Is this just a way to lure Harry down there? That worries me. I'm not too worried about the content - I've made it through some pretty intense stuff because of the author, and as I told them, I trust me to take me on your journey, just making me enjoy every step. I like the intimacy that they are easing into. I think it's also good that Harry sees Draco as needy, in a way. This is so brilliant. :) Very nice. I can't wait to see whatever horrors you come up with. So far we've had some pretty tense things, but I can only hope they continue to grow. We, the readers, need that tension, and you build it so well, I do not believe we will be disappointed. Cheers! Can't wait to see more.
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  • From Dreiad on December 09, 2007
    LMAO, the fact the communication sphere has a whole facet for sarcasm is the greatest thing ever! That is *so* Draco. I can just see them setting that part up...Harry being forced to make it record various scathing retorts suitable for many situations hahahaha! Loving this story
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  • From bananasforyou on December 08, 2007
    holy shit!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 08, 2007
    Oh no..Draco help create this problem...that makes him less sympathetic I reckon...but I do like the small touches and comfort Harry is trying to give him to get through this. I see the beginnings of attraction and its kinda bittersweet considering the context. He must have really did something f*cked up or the Ministry betrayed him for them to turn on him like a dog like that. that chapter wasn't so dark though. Whatever you dish out we can handle it..keep it coming!
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  • From misslala on December 03, 2007
    Wow. I can see Draco wanted comfort, and Harry's been doing that already, almost without thought. Even when he's stopped to think about his actions, it's obvious that he does care, even if he hates to admit it to himself. I think it's interesting that he's ashamed of himself. That definately adds an interesting twist to the entire "getting closer" idea. I can't wait for more. I have to say your descriptions are incredible. After reading your livejournal post about your writing process, it brings a whole new angle to the way I read your work. :) It's so very fascinating.

    Thanks for sharing!
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  • From Natwestgirl on December 03, 2007
    I just started reading this it's kinda scary but very good mystery. Thats for shareing
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  • From lissagal99 on December 02, 2007
    You know... I think I've been waiting for this story for about a year... thank you for knowing what to do with this idea. :-)
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  • From ANON - Tempass on December 02, 2007
    This is horrifiingly addictive. You should update like tomorrow, to help me in my poor curious suffering.
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  • From ANON - amy on December 01, 2007
    I really like this story, it's really original and I hope you continue to write it. ^__^
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 01, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - Myra on December 01, 2007
    (In horror) I still can't get over the imagination of bodies, hands, legs. And some of them were still alive, right? My god. Meaning they were just waiting for their time to come? Who are those people? Wizards and witches? Muggles? Those who worked at the department? Or will we find out soon enough in later chapters? It's horrible. What they did to them. This usually happens in a very very extremely terrible nightmare. Wah x.x!!!

    Ohhh Draco (cries)! His condition was just so sad. I hope he'll get better soon (almost impossible, but hey, Harry's with him! One can wish, right?). I mean, how he was desperate for some human contacts with Harry and all. But I'm really not surprised. Can't wait for their feelings (based on trust, you say?) to grow. Yeah, I suppose with the situation they're in, the trust they'll be building for each other must be important, especially to just keep going and survive.

    Will this story be longer than your other stories? Great chapter as usual. Can't wait for the next one! :)
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