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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Jo on April 09, 2008
    I dont even know where to begin when reviewing this story. I suppose I should say that this is one of the most twisted and sometimes horrifying stories I have ever read. Yet even as the story kept becoming more agonizing and painful to read, I kept on reading. It just intrigued me that much that I could not abandon it even tho I wished I could. I applaud you for having written something so dark yet so heart wrenching. Very few stories I read affect me in any way. I must say yours has made me shiver and cheer and just become so enraptured with it. Needless to say I did enjoy it even tho at times I felt horrified by it all. Good job!
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  • From yaoified on April 05, 2008
    well, i was just looking for something to pass the time when i picked this...

    AND I LOVED IT!!!

    it is such a wonder and well writen story that i really wonder why i didn't find it before! thank you for writing it!
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  • From Yume111 on March 07, 2008
    Thanks for a wonderful, very touching, emotional and painful story.
    I didn
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  • From Diane on March 04, 2008
    I just finished this wonderful story and I'm a little sad to see it end. I didn't find it until you posted the final chapter and I think I'm happier for that. I would have hated waiting for updates. Your cliffhangers are brutal. I don't know if it's because you were writing from Harry's POV (sorta, forget the official term) but I get the feeling you really don't think much of mental health care. I really didn't like them anyway. Though I did like the "Welcome to therapy. CATCH!" That had me laughing. What a great way to greet a new patient, wand to the eye. Anyway, you have a really sick mind and this was a true horror story while being heart breaking and fully of love at the same time. Good job.
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  • From ANON - Anabel on March 03, 2008
    I am only on Chapter 19. This story started out with a bang and was keeping me on the edge of my seat until about chapter 16 when I realized this story was what we used to call a "one trick pony". I am beginning to think at this point that the author has no clear idea of where she is going with this one, she just keeps playing the same old trick over and over. Hope I am wrong and will give it a couple of chapters more to see if this story starts to hang together on something other than a gossamer thread.
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  • From Christabell on March 02, 2008
    This was amazing. I've loved all your other stories, but this one was just a completely different approach to a story of finding someone and needing to love them. Amazing :)
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  • From ANON - Rousy_P on March 02, 2008
    Fantastic fic! And I love the ending. Though I don't review too much, I have enjoyed each chapter. Thanks for that! I'll be waiting for your new fic :)
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  • From GreenEyedCat on March 01, 2008
    Good story and I like the ending :-)
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  • From MightyGryffindor on March 01, 2008
    I've been waiting until the last chapter to comment as I wanted to see exactly how many long chapters it took for Harry to finally give in, which by the way it ended, he didn't fully yet again. He still had doubts when he woke up, thinking he was still doing something wrong, and just doing it because Draco liked it. Or, that's the way I took it. He still is trying to deny it even though he got his rocks off the night before the same as Draco.

    To me, I think the story could have stood another chapter with Harry finally giving in and accepting he was gay instead of mearly thinking about doing it. I think most definately, you should have shown that. The way it is left, If I were in Draco's shoes, I'd eventually find someone else who would gladly enjoy having sex. Even if he still tried to stay with Harry. Most likely, the threat of someone else may have been enough of a kick in Harrys' arse to make him admit he liked it and was gay.

    Because of this, it made me not like this story as well as your others. It seemed it was like the old saying, "beating a dead horse", where Harry can't admit he's gay over, and over, and over.
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  • From DannyLove on March 01, 2008
    though it's ended i'm grately sadated i liked the ending and i belive it was all perfect! ^^ keep up your grate story making!
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  • From QueenB on March 01, 2008
    Ch. 34 Sorry for not reviewing in a while. This has been a great story and the sex was absolutely lovely. It's wonderful to be with a partner who knows what they're doing and one who doesn't but is willing to trust you.

    The maze was a thing of wonder, terror and beauty and you made their journey absolutely riveting in terms of physical and psychological challenges. Something about the final words makes me believe there's going to be more in store for these two Men-Who-Lived-Through-the-Maze.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 01, 2008
    Thank you for that Epilogue. Love their flat and how they strategically made the rooms and placed the windows...yay for Ron and hermioen getting married. boo to Harry for almost killing himself! I'm glad you're showing that it will be a constant back and forth for them in terms of hurt, anger, and comfort. Beautiful beautiful love making scene and it's so fitting that Harry would be the one that would be penetrated, to finally let himself be taken...speaks to the whole story and I'm glad that they are where they are at the end. Again, thank you for writing this : )
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on March 01, 2008
    I'm sitting here crying...this chapter was so great. Thank you for writing this story. I love the way you ended it at the start of their exploration of sexual intimacy. That's perfect. I also liked that you revealed who ratted to Skeeter and I'm glad Draco got to spit in the little punk's face. I do hope Harry will learn to control his temper though, Argwal is right, it will only hurt Draco more in the end, but damn that was funny what he did to that guy..lol. It's good that Narcissa is accepting of their relationship, and her threat to Harry was so Malfoy, lol. I'm so glad Ron has seen the light and is ready to talk about marriage with Hermione. This story is so much about transitions and growth and you've done a great job of mirroring it in every aspect from the physical, emotional, to the interpersonal. One of the best fan fics I've ever read. Cheers to you and now I'm off to read the epilogue and get some tissues..lol.
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  • From misslala on March 01, 2008
    Wow. These last two chapters had me an absolute puddle of happiness and sadness all at once. The joy, pain - all of it - had me completely engrossed. I adore that you kept the themes solid throughout, keeping Harry afraid, but willing to take steps because it was Draco, and he trusted Draco. This story, however sad it began, ended with its own happiness, and, I, like thrnbrooke, am so sorry to see it end. It's been an incredible read.

    I hate that the second-to-last chapter seemed to go by so quickly, but I understand why it had to be done, and I absolutely adore the ending. I think it fit well under the circumstances, and that two men, broken, can help put one another back together without being completely dependant on the other any more. Bravo. I hope you are proud of this, it's a wonderful piece. :) Thanks for sharing, hon. Looking forward to the next tale.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 01, 2008
    Thank you for sharing this fantastic story!
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