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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From alleycat88 on March 01, 2008
    *sigh* I remember when you first posted this fic. It was love at first sight for me. Thank you so much for this! Ir was one of the best fics I've ever read.
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  • From Lacegag on March 01, 2008
    This was a wonderful story. I'm so glad I stayed until the end, because it was just fabulous! I've read all your stories up to date and I've enjoyed every one! I can safely say that you are my favorite fan fiction writer. You make me fall in love with the characters all over again. And when I say in love, I'm mean completely, deeply, and passionately in love. I wait with bated breath for another one of your works of literary excellence.
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  • From tiapotter18 on March 01, 2008
    this was a really great story. its amazing how you blended gory suspense and tender love into this story. u always write superb stories, no matter how long or short they are. cant wait for the next story!
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  • From Mylor on February 29, 2008
    One of the best on here, thank you!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 29, 2008
    i cant wait to see how 'changing of the guard' will be. it was lovely!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 29, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 34!!! Though I don't want this to end!!!!
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  • From DannyLove on February 28, 2008
    beautifull ^^ been working more spring and summer is our boom of peeps but i'm glad i can on my day off read your story seems like harry and draco are getting along and working there way to a lovly recovery i loved the seeker part that was the best ^^ such a bich trying to get mentaly unstable people to distroy themselves sounds like my sister -.-

    wondering after this how long this story is? you proably can't tell me but it's worth asking ^^

    awaiting more chapters on my next day off.
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  • From alleycat88 on February 27, 2008
    Aww....I sense a little fluff going on! Loved this chapter! I love how they are exactly the same in how they feel about each other! They each come first. Its cute. In my eyes...
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  • From TimeFlys on February 26, 2008
    'Clap, clap, clap' A round of applause! Skeeter got what she had coming. (Harry could have done much worse then what he did thou.) And great job with their first real sexually intense interaction. I was really worried that Harry was going to take forever to get to that point with Draco.

    My fav. part was the ending of this chapter, with Draco talking to his mom about Harry. It was too cute!!! I hope Harry get busted for listening in. * Squeals at the idea of a blushing nerves Harry! XD* Well can
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  • From ANON - LarienMirel on February 26, 2008
    Skeeter got put in her place and they actually got passed kissing...prolly the best chapter yet!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 26, 2008
    awww...why did their first orgasms together make me tear up!! That was wonderful...I'm so happy they are finding pleasure in each other and are reaching out. this is all we can hope for. And yea, I liked how Harry handled that...although I would have preferred some violence, Harry was right, it would have made things much worse. lol, Harry sure can be scary when he wants to be. I like how he handled Argwal as well, she annoys me a bit but I know why she's pushing him and that's good. I can't believe this is almost over : (
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  • From GreenEyedCat on February 26, 2008
    They are so alike and so cut! :-)
    But I don't think that fainting outside of Dacos door is a wise move ;-)
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  • From misslala on February 26, 2008
    Wow. What a moving chapter. Granted, Harry's exploration of his desires was nice and steamy, but it seemed overshadowed by the revelations of this chapter, which to me speaks loads about the overall direction things have taken. I love the way Harry handled Skeeter. I hate that woman as much as I hate Umbridge. Gah. That's saying something. :P

    Another great chapter. I love how Harry reacted to Draco's joke with his mother and how they both said that the other came first in their lives. Can't wait for the next. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 26, 2008
    They are each other's center! How perfect! I sooo need chapter 33!!
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  • From Dezra on February 26, 2008
    I am so happy with Harry right now, it seems like some of his boundaries are coming down. Is it a coincidence that when he reached past his boundaries, he finally was able to do a proper Lumos?
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