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Reviews for Forgive Those Who Trespass

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From alleycat88 on February 20, 2008
    Very nice. I like how you explained about Harry's magic working differently now. Pretty cool. And how Harry wants to be stron for Draco now. Good chapter! thank you!
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  • From ANON - evalhanne on February 20, 2008
    I was wondering about the story and I'm glad I checked up on it. I'm still really hooked onto this and really would like to see how their therapy goes. I have no illusions of them, namely Draco, getting completely well, I'd be disappointed if he did. This is an excellent piece of work, keep it up, please!
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  • From ANON - LarienMiriel on February 19, 2008
    Heh, your welcome ^-^' I'm glad harry's starting to understand that he's going to be stuck with Draco no matter what...its about time!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2008
    OMGEE. thankyouuuu. I was so scared when Harry was talkin all that b.s. about not loving Draco and only doin it for pity or some stupid shit like that. But then he realized what he REALLY wanted out of his relationship with Draco. I'm soo happy. Now he can go into the future with a clear head and open arms. YAY. thankyouuu. really. i love your story by the way.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 19, 2008
    I'm gonna be honest, when you decided to continue this story after they left the maze, I had doubts about why...I thought it would be anti-climatic but this was one of the most beautiful chapters. The ending had me tearing up. I'm so glad Harry finally understands, and that he's willing to hold on...I love the last few lines about Harry probably not being able to handle anyone who was easy. He's complicated and he's been through a lot, and he need someone as complex and wounded to validate his person, especially when he loses confidence in who he is and what he can do. This is really awesome. I wish it could just go on and on...
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  • From mystiedaze on February 19, 2008
    I really like Agarwal. She is something else, that's it letting Harry have what for. Now Odd Robert he is going to be a hoot i can tell.

    Harry going to Draco was (hand clutched to chest) was heart wrentching. Harry finially admitting to himself that he loves Draco *inner struggles are a pain in the butt.* But my heart went to Draco he gave Harry an "out" at a cost to himself. Yet again using his love for him to set Harry free only this time from Draco himself.
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  • From ANON - LarienMiriel on February 18, 2008
    wow, i'm really happy that your going to be writing more chapters. Can't wait for more!!!
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  • From misslala on February 17, 2008
    Holy shit. I expected arguing and fighting, but based on Draco's promise, I wondered if it was going to turn into one of those situations where they contiunally physically hurt one another to prove their twisted love for the other. I'm SO glad that you didn't skirt the issue of Harry having problems when with his defeat of Voldemort. So many fics make it out like Harry would be completely well-adjusted, and he wouldn't be. His life would be forever changed with the events that took place through his teenaged years.

    The tension mounts in a completely different way. :) THis has remained a fantastic read. Thanks for sharing. :) I'm glad that Harry seems to be admitting to himself that he needs something other than the denial he thinks is making his life worth living. Another great chapter. :) Can't wait for more.
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  • From rAiNwAtEr on February 17, 2008
    Wow. Just wow. I had once thought that as soon as Harry and Draco had gotten together that that would be the end. HOWEVER, much to my delight, I realized that this story has just started. I am delighted that you didn't just give Draco and Harry a happy ending, because it would be too unrealistic. Harry still hasn't excepted his attraction to men, or more importantly, his desire for Draco. He is not ready to be physical with Draco. They both need time. Please update as soon you can!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on February 17, 2008
    Hurra for Harry. No he is having no issues NO!
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 17, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 30!!!
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  • From alleycat88 on February 17, 2008
    excellent chapter. I really felt Draco's pain and Harry's frustration with Draco. I was mad at both of them but at different times hahaha. Its almost over huh? I will be sad to see this fic end. I have read it since the beginning and now...well it makes me sad to see such an excellent fic end at last. Thank you for updating.
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  • From lissagal99 on February 17, 2008
    You. Are. Brilliant.
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  • From ANON - Violet Eyes on February 16, 2008
    Thanks for adding me to the email list. This story is amazing. If it was a book, I'd buy the hardcover collectors' edition
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 16, 2008
    OK Ron cracked me up in this chapter, he really would rather Harry move on without Draco, no matter the implications...Everytime Draco spoke in this chapter, I was like, yep, yep, uh-huh, now whatcha got to say to that Harry? lol. He is a bit obsessive though and I agree with Hermione, would probably kill anyone Harry dated at this point. They're gonna be in therapy for years! How are you gonna wrap up in 5 more chapters? I'm just glad their out and are least committed to doing it together, whatever happens after this is icing on the cake, unless they break up or something. Please don't go there... Oh and I had to tell ya that this chapter made me think of Lauryn Hill's Ex-Factor. I don't want to be corny, but I had to share these with you because I couldn't stop thinking of it while reading it:

    It could all be so simple
    But youd rather make it hard
    Loving you is like a battle
    And we both end up with scars
    Tell me, who I have to be
    To get some reciprocity see
    No one loves you more than me
    And no one ever will

    Is this just a silly game
    That forces you to act this way
    Forces you to scream my name
    Then pretend that you cant stay
    Tell me, who I have to be
    To get some reciprocity see
    No one loves you more than me
    And no one ever will


    No matter how I think we grow
    You always seem to let me know
    It aint workin
    And when I try to walk away
    You'd hurt yourself to make me stay
    This is crazy

    I keep letting you back in
    How can I explain myself
    As painful as this thing has been
    I just cant be with no one else
    See I know what we got to do
    You let go and Ill let go too
    cause no ones hurt me more than you
    And no one ever will

    Care for me, care for me
    I know you care for me

    There for me, there for me
    Said you'd be there for me

    Cry for me, cry for me
    You said you'd die for me

    Give to me, give to me
    Why wont you live for me

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