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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Kayo on February 15, 2008
    Oh. So is it almost done? I can't believe asking was the only thing...Draco...Harry. My mind is so overloaded right now. But there's this vague pleasant sensation running around, so even if my brain did shortcircuit from the chapter, it was good. XD Very good. And Harry is no longer the maze! YES! Aw. Draco was just so sweet in a scary kind of way. I like.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 15, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 29!!!
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  • From graballz on February 15, 2008
    OH MY GOD YESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! FUCK YES!!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! (Happy Valentine's Day!) Thank you SO MUCH for getting Harry out of that goddamn maze!!! AND THANK YOU FOR TORTURING RICHARD!!!!!! Gruesome and absolutely sweet revenge...quite possibly not *enough* torturing, but if I actually stop and think about what happened to him with the gut wound and the intestines, then I feel better. THAT'S WHAT YOU GET, YOU BASTARD!!!!! NO ONE MESSES WITH MY DRACO!!!!!

    The description of Harry becoming and being the maze are just fucking brilliant. Really, really amazing. (I don't know how you do it) and then I wanted to cry when Draco (back to *himself* and even improved!) refused to give up!!!! I LOVED the interaction between Hermione and Draco...though I have to be a little curious as to where Ron is at this point...but I'm sure we'll find out soon enough!!!

    I totally understand Harry's POV and musings here. About the suffering and what people expect of him! LOVED it!

    I was a little confused at first at how Harry could 'unsacrifice' himself while Draco couldn't, but I think I understand that it was the issue of 'willingness' or not...and the motive behind that willingness...right?

    If it was a question of the needs of the person for whom the sacrifice was made...does that translate to Draco's 'sacrifice' at all? Since it seemed he sacrificed for the love and safety of his family, would THEY have been able to call him back (the way Draco did to Harry)? Or no because of the circumstances that forced Draco's 'willingness'?

    I SO nearly cried when Draco was telling Harry about how he needed him! And I realized that even though I wanted Richard tortured, Draco needs Harry more than revenge!

    I think I understand Harry's frame of mind (so to speak) when he seemed irritated at Draco for asking for MORE (when Harry had already sacrificed everything for him...or so he thought) and I was hoping that that meant Harry wouldn't go back to being the maze (even if he thought he would at the time).

    And OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVED the way Draco spoke to him in St. Mungo's!!!! So totally Draco!!!! Caring and loving in his way that is so fucked up and twisted that it made me cry!!! Seriously, I was crying and laughing at the same time because they have SUCH a fucked up kind of love, and I WANT THAT!!!! Oh my god!!! "Think about trying to leave me" Oh my poor paranoid absolutely fucking wonderfully misguided Draco!!! Harry is never going to leave you! Just like you're never going to leave Harry! I LOVE IT!!!

    *frustrated huff* Harry STILL doesn't get it? What will it take for him to understand that he IS the best and only thing for Draco? Stupid fucking thick Gryffindor! *lightbulb* Draco's gonna beat him, isn't he? *hopeful* And I mean 'beat' in a good way (you know, BDSM, pain/pleasure, 'sex until their voices are gone from screaming and they can't move afterwards for two days because they fucked each other's brains out' kind of way) Harry's pretty darn thick...it might take several sessions of that *wink*

    *raises hand* I volunteer to be their therapist! Degree? What degree? No, I don't have a degree...you need a degree to give advice on sex? LOL Oh, I meant I'd be their sex therapist and recommend long hours of beatings in order for Harry to understand...

    But in all seriousness, I am so glad that you mentioned therapy because it's realistic and it's one of those little details that just makes the story make so much more sense!!!

    And Draco ALWAYS gets what he wants...*wink* That's one of the things that make him Draco!!! I love you so much for writing this story!!! FUCKING AWESOME
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  • From misslala on February 14, 2008
    Wow. I can say that I wasn't expecting that turn of events. I can't imagine either of them ever being sane again after all of that. Draco was pretty damn relentless on his path to bringing Harry back. I am eager to see what happens next. The key was so simple; a piece under their noses all that time. Heh, what a story. And I can't imagine where it will go next, or what sort of ending will come of it. Yes, they will undoubtedly try to be together, but what happens when the memories come back? Are they going to have an extremely violent relationship? That would seem incredibly cheap, so I don't imagine you doing that. They'd fight for normalcy together, I think, but you could surprise me. Interesting turn of events. How many chapters to go?
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  • From GreenEyedCat on February 14, 2008
    I guess we can say that what ever Draco want's he get's it ;-)
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  • From ANON - LarienMiriel on February 14, 2008
    fweeeee! So good, I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
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  • From mystiedaze on February 14, 2008
    this is a wonderful story. i dont remember reading anything like it before. this last chapter (28) about had me in tears. now i know harry has been through a lot but lets just hit him with a two by four and tell him to get with the program please. cant wait for your next chapter.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 14, 2008
    How funny we're at the end of your story and now the moderators decide to put you on the first latest updates page! fuckers...lol. Anyway, awesome, awesome ending..well not ending but climax. I'm so glad you didn't punk out and made Harry a part of the maze. That was crazy! I almost thought it would just end right there, but I'm so glad you brought him back, or rather Draco did. He didn't give up after 3 months and I"m sure he would have went on trying forever if Harry hadn't come back. By the way, Draco was cracking me the hell up in this chapter. I couldn't tell if he was being crazy or just being crazy funny...maybe a bit of both considering what he's been through. I hope Harry just learns to stop living in the future and start enjoying the present. Therapy is definitely in order for both of them....Thanks for torturing Richard like that...I just wish it could have went on for at least as long as Draco suffered. So, is this the end? or will we find out what becomes of these two? So so glad you wrote this, it's one of the most creative fan fics I've ever read. : )
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  • From Dezra on February 14, 2008
    Harry is so stubborn in his convictions. Even if they are wrong.
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  • From DannyLove on February 14, 2008
    well that was eventfull ah draco yelling and thretening harry with the pain of taking out a lung and feeding it to him thats love there. can't wait till harry is better to get his whole spin on it what it must have been to be a room the maze itself...did anyone drink the sap? oh i had wished a wose fat for richerd TT.TT well wonder how there recovery will go and then the question of there relashonship. have you ever thought of righting a book...bet it'd be good lol don't mind me this is the first time i'm reading your story when it's light outside lol
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  • From alleycat88 on February 14, 2008
    It always amazes me just how brilliant your work is. Truly. I was hanging on every letter this whole chapter. I loved it. How everything was seen through Hary's eyes...or spirit. I feel for them...they might never be sane again but at least they are together.
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  • From ANON - Violet Eyes on February 13, 2008
    Your story is amazing! Gruesome and graphic, but spectacularly well written. I can't wait to read more. Please add to your update mailing list. shado_phoenix@yahoo.com
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  • From alleycat88 on February 13, 2008
    omgomgomgomgomgomgomg!!! I need more! Please update soon! PLEASE! OH NO! Please say Harry has something up his sleeve!
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  • From bananasforyou on February 12, 2008
    omg!i hope they all leave together but not richard.
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  • From AttentionDeficit on February 12, 2008
    That was sad.
    It hurt.
    But I was expecting it.
    You write exceptionally well. And your story is very intresting.
    Please Update soon. I have to find out how it will end, since you have made me so curious.
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