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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From QueenB on February 10, 2008
    Ch. 26 That was drastic and I can see how it had the potential to go wrong. I can understand why someone like Snape would sneer at Harry's attempts to play the hero. Much of what he does looks like risk-taking coupled with the sheerest amount of dumb luck.

    However, since he obviously isn't a scholar like Hermione, this is the kind of behavior that works well for him. I'm just hoping it stands up when he meets Richard. I'm not sure Harry even understands what kind of person he's dealing with. I've come to believe Richard genuinely wants his stated goal--to allow wizards to suffer grievous wounds without being crippled or allowing loved ones to die. He's a true fanatic: a person willing to destroy people in order to save the world.

    I'm just wondering what his place at the center of the maze is.
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 10, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 27!
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  • From GreenEyedCat on February 10, 2008
    As if Draco would let Harry go now, after what he had been shown.
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  • From ANON - LarienMiriel on February 10, 2008
    Okay, thanks for telling me! I wouldn't have figured it out otherwise ^-^'
    wow, with chapter 26 you really outdid yourself on the 'awwwww how sweet they love each other that much!' thing there...not that thats bad, sometimes it can be better than a sex scene. Which btw it was!
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  • From misslala on February 09, 2008
    What an absolutely intriguing spell that Harry used. :D A very nice chapter. :D I haven't got anything productive to say other than I loved it, and I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
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  • From alleycat88 on February 09, 2008
    That was the most heart-wrenching scene in the whole fic. Wonderful. I love what Draco was mouthing towards the end....*Mine* Very nice. Thank you.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on February 09, 2008
    When I first starting reading this chapter, I was hopeful, but as it went on, I was like, oh this is gonna be bad. I had almost lost hope until he entered Draco's mind. Speaking of which, that was one of the most intimate, non sexual scenes I've read yet. Also, it's amazing how you managed to take us into Draco's mind while placing us into Harry's at the same time. The way Harry revealed himself to Draco while in there was so fucking cool. Again, great writing. Things should be really different between them now, no walls...but I'm sure Harry will manage to try to construct a few anyway, lol. OK, I have a idea what is coming now, and I hope there's another way, and I also hope Richard is at the center so Draco and Harry can whoop his ass! :)
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  • From Christabell on February 09, 2008
    Damn. That was just... wow. I'm normally very impressed with your writing, but this chapter, especially that last section, absolutely blew me away.

    Fantastic job :)
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  • From QueenB on February 09, 2008
    Ch. 25 Excuse me. I meant, turns him over to the maze spider. (My hands were a little shaky.) I've read stories in which the worst that happens to captured prisoners is rape and torture. Your story proves there are much worse things than that. :O~~~~~
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  • From thrnbrooke on February 09, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 26!!!
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  • From QueenB on February 08, 2008
    Ch. 25 This Richard is an absolute fiend. I doubt very much if even Voldemort stooped so low as to making his people eat each other. I hope when Harry finds him, he touches him to the maze spider. >:E
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  • From alleycat88 on February 08, 2008
    Oh my God....I almost cried...I had to cover my mouth when I read that. It was so horrifying....he ate her. His friend who he had sacrificed so much for.....That was so sick. Richard the douchebag....Oh GOD! Poor Draco.....Jesus....Anyway EXCELLENT chapter! I was thorougly horrified by it!
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  • From graballz on February 08, 2008
    AUGH!!!!! OH MY GOD!!!!! YOU DID IT AGAIN!!!!!! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK! As soon as Richard said, "How did she taste?" I was like, "OH FUCK NO!!! NO!!! HE DIDN'T!!!! NONONONONONONONONONONONO" but he DID!!!!! God, that was a GREAT twist, and you TOTALLY caught me off-guard (yet again!) LOL *loves*

    Alright, I'll ask you this again, where you actually have a chance of answering (since I asked in your oneshot, which technically wouldn't bode a response since it's only one chapter).

    Do you work? Like, do you have an actual job? Because, seriously, HOW do you have an occupation and still have time to come up with all of these AMAZING original plots?????? AND not only that, but you have SO MANY! Even when you're working on 2 or 3 WIPs, you still post several oneshots at random!!! WHAT IS YOUR SECRET???

    Whatever it is, keep it up! Loved the chapter!!! Need more!
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  • From ANON - Catsbee on February 08, 2008
    I Loooooovvee this story...it is without a doubt one of the best and most creative i have ever read, especially on this site. You truly are a talented writer and that's coming from a fellow writer! So many of the stories on this site are written terribly and it's such a relief to find one so good. I'm sad for it to end! I hope you'll do a sequel! Oh please please do a sequel!!
    Best Wishes and keep on writin'!
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  • From ANON - larienmiriel on February 07, 2008
    oh my god! thats just so disgusting i can't belive richard actually made draco eat her! tho it reminds me of one story, only the kid ate his pet goat without knowing it...and not some girl **shudders**
    I can't figure out the phrase, what is it?
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