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Reviews for Complications

By : EighthSaga
  • From ANON - Anon on November 26, 2007
    Ooo, well good start! Can't wait to see where it goes. Vixen x
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  • From chickaboo on November 26, 2007
    Just wanted to tell you that I love this story and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From bananasforyou on November 26, 2007
    so great more please!!!
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  • From Utopia on November 26, 2007
    I just realised we can make requests! oooh, I'd like to see:

    * Draco explaining this to his friends.
    * Draco explaining this to Hermione, and her explaining more to him than he knew.
    * Other ladies and lads tripping over themselves in a futile attempt to attract Hermione and Draco.
    * Some outdoor nookie, by the light of a full moon perhaps?
    * A unique romantic dinner for two (you decide on the how, what, where bit).

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  • From myangeldraco on November 26, 2007
    sorry just reviewed and accidently deleted!! I was telling you that your story is promising, it is well written and I can't wait for more!!!
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  • From Gryffindorclutz on November 26, 2007
    Wonderful! I can't wait for you to update! I love veela fics and there aren't enough out there. Can't wait!
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  • From ichiruki on November 26, 2007
    I like this. Good start! I think what I liked most was Draco finding out on his own, in addition to all the quirky book titles, facts about his life like his love of hot chocolate lol. A nice change from most veela type fics I've read, not that they're wrong or bad, it's just I have the distinct impression that most of the time someone is always telling him more or less "Hey little buddy you're a veela now", it's nice change of pace to see him use his brain and figure it out his own.

    Ok, my only suggestion is to keep using your imagination and keep on taking that unique perspective. The only time I think a premise becomes cliched (like for instance Head Boy and Girl fics with adjoining rooms and the works) is when people get lazy and don't invent their own twists to things or if the characters are just too perfect etc. If every story is similar and the characters always perfect it becomes a bland and a "been there read" that read. But anyways, after reading the first chapter I'm curious to see how the rest will play out.

    Kudos.





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  • From Eilisbelle on November 26, 2007
    I like the beginning of your story. I find that you've really taken your time, and put a lot of thought into it, instead of rushing through the "explanation" either before or after the defining event, to put it plainly, this story doesn't feel rushed at all. I appreciate that!! Good beginning!
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  • From IrishChic20 on November 26, 2007
    Oooh! I love this idea. By all means, let's move along to the Hogwart's Express...
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on November 26, 2007
    great beginning, i can't wait to see where the story goes from here.
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  • From wudelfin on November 26, 2007
    like the begining, simple and with both perspectives. very nice!!
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  • From Utopia on November 26, 2007
    Can you put a break between the bit where it jumps from Draco to Hermione? A few ... or *** or something similar would be nice!

    Fangs! Oh I bet that was a shock and a half for him! Can you put in how he initially reacted to his new appearance? How did he find out about the fangs? (I can see him biting his tongue and wondering where the pain came from!).

    If Hermione is his mate, then is she Veela too? Does that explain their tiredness? I guess they're having to go through something equivalent to puberty again so their bodies can transform. Talking of transformations... is Hermione going to change too. Will the curly mass she calls hair suddenly become blonde and sleek? Will she be able to transform into the crow-like-thingy from the quidditch world cup? Will she have the ability to capture the attention of men and have them do stupid things (like when Harry and Ron wanted to leap off the stands at the quidditch world cup.)

    I'm VERY intrigued with this! I can't wait for more!
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  • From Camryn31 on November 26, 2007
    ooh i like it
    nice start!!! update soon........
    (btw draco wid fangs?? lol)
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  • From lupinsgal on November 26, 2007
    I like it. Keep it coming.
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