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Reviews for Complications

By : EighthSaga
  • From SecretQuill on March 27, 2008
    after she's fallen for him, please don't make her a passive house witch, give her an amazing job and a great future, and please no kids yet!!!
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  • From kazfeist on March 27, 2008
    I'm so glad you updated! I think my favorite moments was the 'good morning' dream Hermione had. I can't understand Hermione, though. If Veela are so rare, and she's so bright, she should know her life with Draco will be wonderful. He wouldn't deny his Mate anything her heart desired. Hopefully, she'll reach that conclusion before either is too physically harmed. :D
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  • From ANON - Nannie on March 27, 2008
    yeah...finally...u've already updated new chapter! can't wait to read more and more lol things are getting more exciting huh? xD well done...

    wanna know how they'r gonna survive Veela situation in next stage xD

    keep up good work, Please!!!
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  • From LadyBlueEyes on March 27, 2008
    Yay! an update. i really like this story. i think my facorite part is defintely in the newest chapter when Draco brings Hermione inside after she fell asleep outside. its when she kisses him on the nose and says she is going to bed. i love sweet moments like that...so keep up the great writing!
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  • From chickaboo on March 27, 2008
    How about I love the whole story? lol Great update! By the way, I was so happy to see you had updated....it's been a while eh? Hope you update again soon!
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  • From ANON - PotterEntourage on March 27, 2008
    My favorite chapter has to be Dreams, i love the line "why do you deny me?" that haunts her! Glad you came back, hope you continue, and feel better!
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  • From LadyVoldemort87 on March 18, 2008
    i need you to update this please? your killing me!
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  • From sweetypie on March 13, 2008
    I think this is an absolutely delectable story... One of the best I've read so far on this website!! Please update soon! It is sooo good!!!!
    P.S. Hope you feel better
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  • From shadowclaw on March 02, 2008
    Although it is an overdone plot, I like where you're going with this. I really liked last chapter's ending where they ended up just sleeping together (not in a naughty way). It was really cute. I like tender Draco (yum?). Keep up the good work.
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  • From Nikkilicious on February 19, 2008
    Eeek! Sorry but I forgot this in my other review. My email is psychopyro666@mchsi.com if you want to contact me about the beta thing. Thanks again and this story is nice!
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  • From Nikkilicious on February 19, 2008
    Hi! So, I've been reading this fic for the past two days (and I haven't been reviewing I know! I'm sorry!), and I wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it so far. I don't generally read Veela fics but I was drawn to this one for some reason. I'm glad that I did because it is lovely. I like the plot and it is very entertaining.

    For Hermione's characterization, I think you did a wonderful job. She is resistant and firey and confused but also brave and curious. She hasn't fallen for Draco yet and we can tell that it will be a while before she does.

    That being said... I think that Draco's characterization is slightly off. But that isn't necessarily a bad thing. I mean, he seemed to accept everything so easily. Too easily perhaps. And he isn't even freaking out over the fact that his fated is Hermione Granger, a mudblood. BUT I know that some of that is because of the Veela instincts and you made that very clear. Though, in the future I would love to see some thoughts about his family and the war and what he thinks about that. Other than that, I think he is well characterized. Like the way he responds to things and stuff.

    There were a few spelling errors but I didn't copy them or point them out, sorry! But, I would definitely be willing to beta for you if you are interested. I'm online every day and I'd get it done quick. :) I also beta for another person so I have a tad bit of experience. If you are interested let me know.

    So all in all, the fic is very lovely and I can't wait for more. Looking forward to an update!


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  • From ANON - casey on February 14, 2008
    i love this story!! and make it last as many chapters as possible. =]
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  • From ANON - Eppy on February 05, 2008
    Wow, hope you feel better soon! Great story btw, I can't wait to read more!
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  • From starrynite45 on February 02, 2008
    i love ur story! i can say it's the most favorait Veela fic with Draco/Hermione pairing.! you have ur style to write and it feels different from other. keep writing and i'll keep reading & review :D
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  • From kazfeist on February 01, 2008
    There are so many Veela!Draco stories out there, that it's very possible someone has used the plotline. One of the first I have ever read was here on this site: Fated to be Tied, by KatieVixen. Never was completed, and it had both Draco and Blaise as Veelas. Hope your fever gets better, and looking forward to seeing how YOU write the Veela idea. :D
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