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Reviews for Complications

By : EighthSaga
  • From Utopia on December 11, 2007
    green and blacks do a cracking hot chocolate too!
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  • From Crittenz on December 11, 2007
    Did I mention how much I love this story? Not enough you say... well I LOVES IT! I love how your taking it slow. I also like how you have Hermione's reaction down for this. If I started have strange dreams about by enemy and said enemy started being nice to me I would suspect something was up and flee from my enemy like a frightened rabbit. Draco is ever suck a fox *giggles* I'm done making stupid jokes now... *loves the story to death some more*
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  • From Crittenz on December 11, 2007
    This is a lovely story. I'm a fan of a Draco veela story through and through. I found two errors. (You told us to let you know)

    1. (No) nodded to her and turned to walk back to his seat. (he)
    2. The last fifteen minutes (until) the train were more difficult that the last half hour.


    Surprisingly for being non-beta'd I expected more mistakes. Your an excellent writer. That's a true compliment too cause I've read some not so good fan-fiction before. Please keep up this story I can't wait to see how everything turns out.
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  • From bananasforyou on December 10, 2007
    oh i was sooo happy when u updated and i look forward to another. i loved the chap!
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  • From janl on December 10, 2007
    I like how this has begun & can't wait to read more. Hope you add more chapters soon!
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  • From superrogue17 on December 10, 2007
    Well, if you like hot chocolate(and live reasonably close to a Starbucks, or a Barnes and Noble with a Starbucks Cafe), there's this lovely thing called Godiva Hot Chocolate. You should try it, it's spectacular.
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  • From SecretQuill on December 07, 2007
    that was a really good chapter :) i'm very much looking forward to the next! i liked that you didn't have him trying to kiss her senseless or something like that or that she'd fall for him just at sight - your way makes it more believable
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  • From mendlyn on December 04, 2007
    Definitely intriguing! Keep it coming.
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  • From Utopia on December 02, 2007
    A few sentences need a bit of tidying up - one or two didn't make much sense!

    However, apart from a few minor difficulties, this was an excellent chapter! It flowed nicely and didn't have a rushed feeling to it; I could feel the length of the train ride as Hermione tried to ignore him, and how Draco tried to ignore the urges.

    So, no dormant veela for Hermione, just the reaction to being a mate to one. I'm hoping she doesn't end up going out with Ron during the course of this fic - it would drive Draco insane and probably result in Ron's funeral!

    What did his parents say? Or did he find the spell to hide his new "form" from everyone before they came home for his birthday celebration? I honestly can't imagine their reaction to the news that their "baby" isn't what they thought he was; I'm somewhere between 'shocked that the veela trait had landed on him' or 'upset that he isn't the perfect pureblood heir'.

    Draco is being the perfect gentleman, and it is certainly nice to see that - manners are so much more positive than insults. I have been brought up to be polite (and so many young people today do not have good manners - they're free, use them! *grumble*) and it is wonderful to see Draco behaving in a more refined and friendly way towards Hermione. So sad that Hermione is convinced she's in the middle of a prank, but he deserves her mistrust after years of insults and hexing between them.

    Personally, I think Draco is just what she needs, realistically I don't think her and Ron would last more than a few months. Hermione needs an intellectual equal to converse with, and, no offense JKR, Ron hasn't got the scruples to keep up with her!

    Another brilliant chapter, and when I come up with a few more requests, I'll let you know. I hope you can squeeze a few of them in for me! *begs*

    9/10
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  • From kmplease on December 02, 2007
    I love that your building the attraction on Hermione's part. Something might be good have Draco be jealous, ( I know every stor has that) but it could be a new friend or Ron, Draco could be jealous or there friendship, just an idea. Please update soon!!
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  • From ichiruki on December 01, 2007
    nice keep it coming! :)
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  • From chickaboo on December 01, 2007
    PLEASE update SOON! I love this story and really can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From bananasforyou on December 01, 2007
    wow !!!!
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  • From SecretQuill on November 30, 2007
    i like it a lot :) make draco and hermione get to know each other before she falls for him, and please make it original! X9
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  • From kmplease on November 28, 2007
    Please let Hermione grow into her looks, she can't have frizzy hair forever!! It depends how you write it draw the veela or straight to the point. I like Draco having to work for Hermione, give him a little challenge. Please update soon!!
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