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Reviews for Enslaved

By : XDracoMalfoyLoverX
  • From AutumnKate on September 01, 2008
    This is a great story! I'm always so happy when I see you've updated!
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  • From materialgirl on August 30, 2008
    Why aren't there more great stories like this one?? Cant' wait for the next chapter!
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  • From pfeil on August 29, 2008
    Shame he can't keep both of them as his slaves...


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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 29, 2008
    wow, they almost did it....I'm glad Harry discovered who it really was, too bad Pansy did also. I'm not feeling Hermione in this fic, and if that's your intention, mission accomplished. She's way too needy and just annoying here, I hope Harry ditches her and tells Pansy what's up for real. I wouldn't mind Ron finding out about Hermione's little crush as well to see what the fallout will be.Oh, you have a misspelling in the last line. Can't wait to see what happens next....good update.
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  • From 94caddy on August 09, 2008
    Very hot. But I like that Hermione seems to want to be with Harry and not Ron.
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  • From SSJ04Mewtwo on August 08, 2008
    As I kept reading this wonderful story, I kept thinking when she would sneak out of Black Manor and inform LV about her success. Hermione getting into the picture is a good twist. She'll have to realize that she can't cross that line with Harry. Ron will have to find out sooner or later. This Mewtwo will be waiting for the next chapter.
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  • From ninjamonkey26 on August 07, 2008
    I'm really digging the hr/h/p threesome i so desperately hope that this doesnt end hr/r...
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  • From lycus on August 06, 2008
    That was a great chapter.But Hermione needs to wake up and forget the lie that she is telling herself. If she really wanted to be with ron she would be with ron, And the whole I want it to be good for ron is utter bullshit, She wants Harry to be her best friend, Lover, and Master she would never give ron control of her like she gave Harry and her jealousy of Pansy is making her realise that she wants Harry in every way, And lets face facts Hermione wants Harry and won't settle for less.
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  • From flatliner15 on August 06, 2008
    started good, but seems it's going to be another harry gets to fuck everyone story, if ron ever found out he wouldn't ever forgive them, so i'm guessing you're going to paint him off like the bad guy?
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on August 06, 2008
    Interesting..this is becoming a love triangle..I wonder what Ron would say to that? Hermione's blow job was pretty hot stuff, even if Harry called out Pansy's name at the end. LOL. That was pretty funny btw. I am interested in where you're taking this and if Harry will come out and tell Pansy that he has feelings for her and if he'll nip this thing with his best friend in the bud before it gets out of hand. Good update.
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  • From SalonKitty on August 06, 2008
    Aww, man, I LOVE Harry in this story. He's so devilishly sexy. And two strong women fighting over him is delicious, as is his diverse reactions to them both. I find Harry quite funny in this role. Looking forward to more.
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  • From lycus on July 07, 2008
    That was an excellent chapter, And having hermione become jealous of pansy was incredable. and that little peek into how hermione wants to please harry is showing something that she can't get from ron. and that is total trust someone becoming submissive to another shows a large amount of trust, and having hermione actively trying to be with harry will propably make her rethink trying to be with ron if she wants harry as her master.
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  • From MDR on July 07, 2008
    I don't understand why he kicked Hermione out. I suppose he could have done it to increase Pansy's feelings for him (she beat out the mudblood, so she should be happy), but he just hurt his friend. Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, and he should be very, very worried about her going to Ron and confessing, or in the very least hurting his friendship with her. In a previous chapter he *seemed* concerned about their friendship and how it might be affected by the domination game, but now he just seems to be thinking with his dick.

    I hope he learns a lesson soon. There is a difference between being dominant, and being an asshole.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on July 05, 2008
    That was kinda cold of Harry the way he totally dissed Hermione....Hermione and Pansy together was kinda hot : )) I like that even though Harry and Pansy are having anal sex it seems almost like they're making love. good update : )
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  • From materialgirl on July 04, 2008
    Love this chapter. Please update soon!
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