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Reviews for Dumbledore and the Insidious Plot

By : Daktalakpak
  • From laica on December 02, 2007
    oh crap you out to kill me with laughter. it`s so funny update soon
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 01, 2007
    Oh you keep me in stitches! I sooo need chapter 6!
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  • From laica on December 01, 2007
    holly crape ha ha ha please update soon
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  • From KBowman on December 01, 2007
    Ah :) well, if you're using in-jokes then thats different. I was reviewing this as if it were written with anyone in mind, if I'd known it were private that would have changed things a bit!
    Thanks for actually reading what I wrote and responding like a grown up. A rare thing these days :)
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  • From Daktalakpak on December 01, 2007
    lol. I almost got got angry at you but then I realized that you have only read the first chapter. I can understand that you don't like the name Dumpty. Hmm, I know it's not looking good for me to explain things but I want to give my view of this story as I saw it when I wrote it.
    I'm trying to great an image of childishness by using that name Dumpty. He's senile and crazy old man. He says weirds stuff like about the oantyhose and so on.
    Hmm, most of the so called jokes in chapter 1 are inner circle jokes. No one will ever understand them. I didn't originally write this to be posted in the internet. I wrote this and much more to be read only by my friends.
    I beg to differ on that fact that I'm not suited for parody. Parody or comedy is actually the only thing I feel comfortable doing.
    I know you haven't read my other stories but that's fine. I do not like that fact that you say I'm not qualified to write a parody if you only read the 1st chapter. That insults me as a writer and a person.
    I wrote this story years ago and read it only a few days ago and decided to post it in here AFF. Many have been supportive of this story and I like it myself. Nothing will ever be as good I this. Nothing.
    Maybe it will be only me who completely understands this odd story but then so be it. It doesn't bother me.

    And last but not least, I hate Barry Trotter books. Or should i say, I dislike them. There are some good parts in them, I know, but in general; what is so good about them? It's the worts parody I've ever read. Think about it, Barry Trotter is set after all the happenings in the books and those are only mentioned briefly. The story has nothing to do with the Harry Potter world. Only names and things have been taken into the book. The plot has nothing to do with HP. That simple it is. :)
    Well, that is my opinion and i respect everyone with different ones.
    I always think it is good to discuss things over.

    yours,
    Minna-chan
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  • From KBowman on December 01, 2007
    I did try to read the first chapter but I couldn't get past you calling Dumbledore Dumpty. I mean, Voldie is bad enough, but that.... sorry, not my cup of tea. I get the feeling you're a good writer but I don't think parody is your thing - the 'random' bits about pantyhose and fish seemed too contrived. I didn't find it very funny - have you read the Barry Trotter books? They're a good example of HP parody :)
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  • From bananasforyou on December 01, 2007
    i thought the entry was spectacular!
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  • From jade22d on December 01, 2007
    I just realized that might have come off as me criticizing you. I'm not. That was AWESOME.
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  • From jade22d on December 01, 2007
    I know this is supposed to be humor/crackfic but I couldn't laugh until after I'd read the whole thing. I was too dumbfounded to do anything but read. I mean.....my god. You didn't leave the reader anytime to get used to something before you brought another shocker into the mix. My brain was overloaded with crack. You have to write more and I'm referring this to my brother.
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  • From thrnbrooke on November 29, 2007
    Oh tooo funny! I sooo need chapter 3!
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  • From bananasforyou on November 28, 2007
    omg!so awesome!!!
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