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Reviews for A Heart So Ravenous (Sequel to A Love So Belated)

By : slashpervert
  • From shey on January 22, 2008
    but it is gonna get better right?
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  • From alleycat88 on January 22, 2008
    Oh.....I dont know what I'll do if Draco dies...or the babies. Update soon...I need to know what will happen!
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  • From Firelady112 on January 22, 2008
    So it does get better?
    Merlin, you're definitely keeping me on my toes here...
    Why doesn't the healer take out the babies? They'll be fine!!! I expected like an emergency cesarean and all you're doing is have him take some potions and... omG I'm seriously upset...
    Please more, and do make it better, please please please, like I've been telling you before...
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  • From kalaway on January 21, 2008
    Normal gestation for twins is like 36-38 weeks, often earlier when there are complications. Generally anytime past 32 weeks means they're quite developed, and would likely be a scheduled C for a mom with lots of problems. Anyway, doesn't really matter, the story is lovely. Draco better not die or I'll be pissed! lol
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  • From dysfunctionalspirit on January 21, 2008
    Ohhhh.. *crys* draco... draco has to live through it.. there's no harry without draco..
    i LOVE the story .. so much i read 'A love so belated' and now up to this chapter in about a day and a half.. I can't wait for the rest!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update VERY soon!! I don't know if i can wait to find out what happens.
    ramble on
    dysfunctionalspirit
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  • From stargirl77 on January 21, 2008
    I really love everything that you write but I have to say that this is the most evil thing you have done! You write this terrifying chapter and then just leave it! How cruel! I really, really love this story though and shooting star/fallen star was one of my favorites as well. I have to ask though, are you writing this story with someone else on this one like you did on fallen star? It all seems to mesh so well if you are. You are an awesome writer and you should definitely keep writing anything and everything. Amazing.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on January 21, 2008
    arghhhh!!! Why must you take us on these emotional roller coasters??! The only glimpse of hope I have right now is the note you left at the bottom of the last chapter about it getting worse before it gets BETTER....so things will get better eventually...promise? Please don't kill Draco. I'm so glad you had Ron and him talk things out. I don't see Ron keeping that secret too long from Harry though, but maybe Ron's changed, it doesn't seem that Draco has much in regards to being sneaky. I like how realistic you're painting this Mpreg, the complications and struggles are what something this extraordinary would probably be like...if this actually works, I hope Draco gets a medal for inventing the potion that made it happen. He deserves some sort of acknowledgement and redemption after all he's been through in ALSB and this one...certaintly doesn't deserve to die. :-(
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  • From dracoharry4life on January 21, 2008
    I don't think I can bare to read this story any longer. It is to sad.
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 21, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 31!!!
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  • From RRW on January 20, 2008
    Please say you won't kill Draco...I mean to go through so much to just end it, it would be pretty cruel twist of fate.
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  • From QueenB on January 20, 2008
    Ch. 30 Well, this was an unexpected and pleasant surprise. I thought that Ron would apologize to Harry first. Approaching Draco took a lot of courage; it makes me think a lot better of him.

    It's unnerving to think that Draco might die; he's taking Harry's feelings far too lightly if he thinks that facing his own death against Voldemort and the death of a loved one are the same thing. Harry has known about the prophecy about Voldemort for years. He was very well aware that he might die and had time to deal with that fact. Draco's sudden unexpected death would devastate him.

    But Draco is right on one score. Harry will need his friends around him and Ron can be a pillar of strength when he wants to be.
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  • From dracoharry4life on January 20, 2008
    I really have liked this story. But I get the idea you are going to let Draco die. That is sad. Medically, there is no reason for that. At seven months they can be taken.
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  • From Leentjef on January 20, 2008
    THIS WAS VERY VERY VERY GOOD
    BUT PLAESE DON4T LET THEM DIE
    POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From Firelady112 on January 20, 2008
    No! Don't, don't, don't! You're ignoring medical reality here. The twins would be FINE if they were taken now! There's no need for Draco to die!

    Please, NO! I mean it, I swear, I've never read a sweeter story but I can't STAND the idea of Harry being alone and heartbroken and having two baby boys to look after...

    Please... *snif* don't do this to them!!! :-(((
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  • From alleycat88 on January 20, 2008
    Oh god....I was rather hoping maybe Draco really did think he could survive...but i now know i will soon have to face the inevitable.....*holds back tears* thanks for updating!
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