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Reviews for A Heart So Ravenous (Sequel to A Love So Belated)

By : slashpervert
  • From Leentjef on December 31, 2007
    this was very very good keep going and post soon
    and i hope the baby survives
    post soon
    bye bye
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  • From QueenB on December 31, 2007
    Ch. 18 Slap me with butter and call me a biscuit! I've read Mpreg stories before (even written one) but what a shock! It is so amazing to be surprised with this basic concept even after all this time. I wondered how this would happen and you answered the question very neatly. Well done!

    The passion was also different but sexy as any other sex scene that you've written for them. I was also moved by Harry's reaction to the news of Draco's pregnancy. I had wondered at Draco's motivation in not telling Harry; he showed a touching sensitivity to Harry's likely response if it didn't work.

    I wonder if it will be a home birth with just the two of them or whether they'll get outside help. Narcissa likely will find out since she sees Draco so often. What will SHE have to say about this? Will Daddy Malfoy be pleased or hit the roof? After all, he is getting a grandkid out of this, even if it's not with a pureblood witch...

    The upcoming chapters are going to be--interesting, to say the least. :D
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  • From AloneintheOpen on December 30, 2007
    And so, let the pregnancy begin.
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  • From NussyMalfoy on December 30, 2007
    OMG! I can't wait to see what Narcissa is going to say! I am so happy to see the both of you still writing together! I love your stories soo much! If I could re-read fics I would be reading your stuff all the time! I love being able to check the computer and see a new chapter! Thanks you are awesome!

    Nus
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 30, 2007
    This is my first Mpreg fic and I'm enjoying it. I'm glad Harry didn't get too upset, although I thought what Draco did was a bit shady, it worked out at the end...well at least I hope it does. I hope there aren't any complications...I wonder what's going on with his internal organs...delivery is gonna be a bitch for him. I hope now Lucius will come around now that there's a heir to carry on the Malfoy bloodline...I guess we'll see.
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  • From ANON - Janae on December 30, 2007
    chapter 19 and 20 PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From kalaway on December 30, 2007
    wooh, that's an interesting development...very very...speechless. It's hard to picture, but still hot! Little boggling though, :cool:
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  • From graballz on December 30, 2007
    OMG OMG OMG Draco's pregnant?!?!?!??!!?! That's what I took the little spell thingy to mean...let's see if I'm right!!

    EEK!!! I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!! *jumping up and down and screaming around the house* YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY I love it when it's Draco who is pregnant (not Harry)!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAA

    AWWWWWWWWW I think I'm going to die from the cuteness and lovey-dovey factor!!!!! THAT's why Draco didn't tell Harry!!!! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

    ..........

    I'm speechless....he has a vagina AND a cock??? (and I'm jealous!!!) Wow....did NOT see THAT one coming! Way to keep me on my toes, you guys!
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  • From silverdragon87 on December 30, 2007
    mwahahahahahahaha i knew i was right!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Cris on December 29, 2007
    I just read chap 17. HOLY EFFING SHIT!!! I had wondered, as soon as it was mentioned that Draco would be a girl for while, if it would be possible for him to get prego. It's awesome how Draco (or should I say you) figured out how to resolve the heir issue. Awesome. I have loved this story so far and believe that you are doing very well with sticking to character. I also loved the portrait gallery idea. Can't wait to see how this plays out!
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  • From Rettavex on December 29, 2007
    Oh man. I am just waiting to see the fall out around this "blue" development. I wonder will Harry be pissed. He should be. That is very deceitful of Draco, and I am not sure why he didn't tell Harry about it. Hmm...I await the rest. :)
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  • From ANON - Aidi on December 29, 2007
    Ohdamn. Malepreg. :3
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  • From QueenB on December 29, 2007
    Ch. 17 So blue means...what? The test was positive or negative? (Loved the sex and the sweet talk, by the way.)
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  • From Utopia on December 29, 2007
    Oh, now I've confused myself! I'm trying to work out if its still M/Preg now Draco's a woman, even if it is temporary? It will be M/Preg when he turns back, because he'll be male again - unless its just a physiological change and not genetic that the potion induces? If he's still got XY chromosomes and a female body (hey, its magic, could happen) then it is M/Preg...

    And now I have done a quite spectacular job of confusing myself FURTHER, so I'll shut up and just give you an 11/10 for a truly unique and top-quality chapter!
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  • From X5927alpha on December 29, 2007
    After reading what someone else said about Draco being sneaky in getting pregnant, well yes, he was. But Harry wants a family, doesn't he? And if Draco was a girl full time it wouldnt really matter that he got knocked up, so bah. I say, Yay still. I love Draco being sneaky for a cause.
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