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Reviews for A Heart So Ravenous (Sequel to A Love So Belated)

By : slashpervert
  • From BloodyRose on December 25, 2007
    oh my good god! update right now! I'm not joking! draco as a girl will be very...interesting. lol. update ASAP! I love it!
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  • From ANON - mari on December 24, 2007
    OH CRAP! draco malfoy a girl!!!! now this i gotta see hahahaha i cant wait!!!! ^_^
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 24, 2007
    waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!lol. This is gonna be really interesting, can't wait to see how they both deal with it. Hopefully it will be very temporary but long enough for them to have hot pseudo hetero sex...now if draco gets preggers off of this, it's gonna be a crazy turn for this story. looking forward to the next chapter! lol
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  • From silverdragon87 on December 24, 2007
    lemme guess, this "turning into a girl thing" is going to get Draco pregnant...stupid boys.

    I loved this chapter though

    and Harry smirking at his PJs ahahah
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  • From QueenB on December 24, 2007
    Ch. 15 Dang, I know how Harry must feel. You cum down (wait, scratches that out) come down from really great orgasmic sex and then learn your partner wants a sex change. I guess this must be what is meant by the English term gobsmacked. :P
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 23, 2007
    I'm so glad Harry left the damn house. I understand they are going through a tough time, but I think that Harry was prone to being codependent and cutting off important people before the rape happened and now it's just exaberated. I hope Draco is gonna be alright at home alone...please don't have him having a PTSD flashback. I hope he's getting stronger. So glad the Weasley's don't hold a grudge. I'm glad you explained how George knew because that was always bugging me. Maybe one day Draco will be welcomed at the Burrow as well. This was a feel good chapter...now I wonder how Ginny would react around Harry now?
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  • From silverdragon87 on December 23, 2007
    hey, sorry i haven't been keeping up with reviews... I know I should because I do love this story.

    Im glad Harry was able to get out of the house, though I do realize just how difficult it was for both of them. And that part at the end when Harry and George were talking about Fred I seriously started crying. Gah, I'm such a baby.

    Anyway, fabulous chapter as always. Keep up the good work and Merry Christmas, or whatever you celebrate!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 21, 2007
    That was so freakin' hot....I like how much they play. I feel so bad for Draco, I guess it's gonna be up and down for a long time for him though.
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  • From QueenB on December 21, 2007
    Ch. 13 I believe I've figured out what I like best about your stories. I look forward to the discussions between Harry and Draco even more than the sex since the sexual intimacy seems to flow naturally from the closeness they establish beforehand. the discussions they have about their past and the people who know them show, for once, just how different they are...but how alike in the things that matter to them.

    Harry has a life outside of his feelings for Draco: friends, allies, admirers, etc. Draco is the odd man out since he no longer has these things (if he ever did) and the Slytherin obviously is feeling that lack keenly. How strange is it to think that the boy who came off as so privileged and aloof is actually the truly needy one?

    Thanks for making your characters so three dimensional and the story so believable. This tale gets better and better every time I read it.
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  • From KimothytheSage on December 21, 2007
    You can respond to reviews by answering them in an Authors Note at the beginning or end of a chapter. That's what most authors do.
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  • From ANON - janae on December 20, 2007
    chap 13 please
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  • From ANON - shadow on December 20, 2007
    this chapter made me cry... or it could be cause im an emotional mess today... either one

    anyway it was awsome can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From silverdragon87 on December 20, 2007
    i have a really horrible feeling that something really bad is about to happen


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  • From AloneintheOpen on December 19, 2007
    The tension in this chapter, is very high. I am enjoying this story very much.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 19, 2007
    Best chapter in this story yet IMO. It was heartbreaking how people were reacting to Draco but not surprising...can't really blame some of them as they probably don't know the full story about Draco's actions during his 7th year since he doesn't want to tell anyone. But the homophobia is not cool and I hope that if and when they do have a child of their own they can combat some of that by just doing it, cause it sounds pretty taboo. I wish that who ever said that to Draco would step up to get smacked down. What a coward. I just really felt this chapter's dialogue and I don't know..it felt really real reading it. The interaction between Narcissa and Andromeda was pretty dead on for sisters who don't speak...it's good that Draco can serve as an example of change. I'm so glad to see that Mrs. Weasley remains Mrs. Weasley no matter what happens, Harry will always have a mother in her no matter what. I wish Ginny had been there, I would have loved to see how she's dealing with this as time goes on. The funniest part was Snape arching his eyebrow at Draco..lol. That's so Snape. I hope you can revisit this exhibition when they are enabled with hearing and speech because I'd love to hear how the portraits respond to this new union.
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