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Reviews for A Heart So Ravenous (Sequel to A Love So Belated)

By : slashpervert
  • From ANON - janae on December 10, 2007
    Next chapter please
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  • From QueenB on December 10, 2007
    Ch. 6 It's difficult to put my feelings into words here but I'll try. Harry has fought to protect himself and those around him all during his time in Hogwarts. It's definitely part of who he is. But it's not about the fighting per se; it's about taking care of those around him. I remember a statement I read once although I forget where: "Do not fight to kill your enemies. Fight to protect your friends."

    So I suppose that means sometimes you don't struggle. That may have been what was going through Harry's mind when he relinquished his wand. Draco finds that unacceptable but doesn't allow Harry to think so. If Harry had fought, would he have killed both men before they killed Draco? Perhaps, but perhaps not. He's fought against greater odds but he was dealing with two psychopaths who knew the ground and had Draco tightly restrained. Things might have turned out very badly indeed.

    But Draco has a point and it might be too late for Harry to change his nature. Not fighting sometimes isn't a viable option.

    The lovemaking was extraordinarily tender and had a delicacy about it that was almost excruciating to read. Both men were trying so hard to please and be pleased. I could feel Harry's strain to hold himself back and Draco's equal struggle to allow pleasure and to hold back the fear. You do a fantastic job of laying out their emotions and it heightens and complements the sensuality; it's as if we're there, experiencing the scene from both viewpoints. It makes reading this story such a joy. :)
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  • From thrnbrooke on December 10, 2007
    Sooo need chapter 7!!!
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  • From CanadiangirllovesHP on December 09, 2007
    Wonderful chapter. Finally Draco is healing.
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  • From silverdragon87 on December 09, 2007
    oh thank the fucking gods!!

    i'm so happy that they can BE together again! YAY! it's really helping draco heal, i'm so glad that he has been able to get through this.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 09, 2007
    OK, that first half was really intense. I didn't know where Draco was going with that. It was heartbreaking...and really just...wow. That's all I have to say. I'm glad they're making love again, although it feels a little soon, but I'm sure his recovery isn't over. Maybe this is just a good beginning. Great chapter.
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  • From AloneintheOpen on December 08, 2007
    Well with my busy schedule, its nice to come back to a story that is frequently updated. I'm rather confused by the action at the end of this chapter, but I think I have a small idea of whats going to happen next. This is a wonderful piece, and I enjoy every second of it.
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  • From Veracityrules on December 08, 2007
    Wow, a bit bizarre but understandable behaviour really. Draco is slowly recovering and this is a sure sign of it but what bumps in the road lie ahead?

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  • From QueenB on December 08, 2007
    Ch. 5 Okay, this is more than a little frightening. Considering the mood Draco is in, I don't think Harry should indulge him until he finds out exactly what he intends. Draco isn't on an even keel by a long shot and the news that both of his tormentors are dead isn't necessarily going to make him balanced again.

    Harry should have at least waited until Draco was finished with whatever he was doing in the lab. Interrupting him while he's concocting dangerous potions can't be smart. Honestly, Harry is too impulsive for his own good.
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  • From ANON - Bubba on December 08, 2007
    Dude, you are killing me softly with this stuff. Please post more soon!
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  • From silverdragon87 on December 08, 2007
    what's going to happen!?!?
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  • From kalaway on December 07, 2007
    !!!! GOOD! I think Lucius did it! Draco is scary. I want the next chapter!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 07, 2007
    OK, I was really turned on for a minute there until Draco seemed to be doing that for other reasons. lol. I hope Draco is alright and this isn't some kind of foreboding for some sort of unhinging of his mind. I'm glad he doesn't have to go on trial, I wonder if Lucius was behind that...couldn't be Narcissa? You think she would do something that crazy...hmmm...then again.

    Nice chapter.
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  • From Veracityrules on December 07, 2007
    Weel, it's a start on the road to recovery. Great update. I take it from the speed of them, the pace will be somewhat slower than the previous fic? No worries if it is, it's still fairly quick compared to some stories.

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  • From gizachick on December 06, 2007
    I don't really understand why those two haven't thought to see if Draco would be comfortable being in the dominant position, and then working from there. It seems like Harry always takes the dominant role these days.
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