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Reviews for A Heart So Ravenous (Sequel to A Love So Belated)

By : slashpervert
  • From Veracityrules on January 24, 2008
    Baby boys, a potentially scandalous revelation and Draco's life hangs in the balance. Oh, what a dramatic soap opera of a fic that you have created!

    I hope Draco makes it and the twins are okay.
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  • From BloodyRose on January 24, 2008
    You so can not get away with hanging me like that! update! i'm know you're probably getting really sick of me, but keep going. he has to live! lol
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  • From Leentjef on January 24, 2008
    WOW THIS WAS GOOD KEEP GOING AND POST SOON
    BYE BYE
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  • From Firelady112 on January 24, 2008
    I envy Harry's sharp mind, I never would have thought of that antidote potion... yet I'm still afraid of how this will turn out...
    Please let the boys be OK, and Draco, and Harry, and everybody! Btw I love how mature and supporting Ron is in the fic. And Draco deserves a spanking for being so stubborn! God damn!!!
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  • From ANON - SoftObsidian74 on January 24, 2008
    Not liking you too much right now...heartbreaking chapter...if this gets worse, I don't know how much longer I'll be able to hang on. Draco deserves better.
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  • From alleycat88 on January 23, 2008
    Its become so touching now...so sad and sweet! Thanks for updating!
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  • From BloodyRose on January 23, 2008
    Please don't kill Draco! i love him and i will cry so hard if he dies! I'LL HATE YOU FOREVER! no i won't, lol, i'll just be really sad! make him like, have to be in a wheelchair or something if you have to, but please kill him! pretty please with a cherry on top? lol, keep updating, i love it!
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  • From Leentjef on January 23, 2008
    VERY VERY VGOOD KEEP GOING
    AND KEEP THEM ALIVE
    BYE BYE
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  • From Extraho on January 23, 2008
    oh pleaseplease please please please dont kill dracooooo *wails*
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  • From dracoharry4life on January 23, 2008
    As I was reading, I thought....at least this chapter isn't going to be sad. It finished that way. I really hope there is a happy ending.
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  • From QueenB on January 23, 2008
    Ch. 32 Harry really never does talk about the Dursleys, does he? I don't think that's a fault on the parts of Ron or Hermione that they didn't pry. They may have picked up on his unhappiness and decided not to discuss something that he didn't want to talk about. Harry can be stubborn that way.

    It occurs to me that Harry might want to make arrangements for the children in case of a tragedy. If Draco dies, he will take care of the children. But Harry's now training to be an Auror, a dangerous profession. What if he gets killed as well? He should start drawing up papers that will place the twins in proper care; after his experience with the Dursleys, he wouldn't want them to wind up with people like that.

    Of course, Narcisa is the obvious choice. She's mellowed a lot since Harry first knew her. But her lifestyle is a little too...distant. There's a good chance the boys might grow up arrogant and snobbish the way Draco first was. Maybe they could be given to Andromeda? Little Teddy would have company and the twins would get into another family.

    These are just a few random thoughts that came to me while reading this chapter. After the melancholy of contemplating Draco's probable death passed, I started thinking along more practical lines. I'm curious as to how you will handle this.

    This is turning out to be a tender, bittersweet story. I remain an avid, charmed reader.
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  • From X5927alpha on January 23, 2008
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo...don't kill off Mommy Draco! *takes over the world in an attempt to use that to stop this story from adding death of a beloved character to it*
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 23, 2008
    Soooo need chapter 33!!! Draco has to be there!!! He just has to be!!
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  • From PrincessButtercup on January 22, 2008
    This getting so good. Please if you have a update list can you put me on it princessbuttercup80@yahoo.com. Thank you
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  • From QueenB on January 22, 2008
    Ch. 31 It figures that Harry would be angry; that seems to be his first reaction to disturbing news. Frankly, it serves Draco right. How did he think Harry would react to the news that he might die? And Harry is bothered by more than that. He's discovered that Draco is keeping secrets and that's always nervewracking in a relationship. You wonder what else the other person isn't telling you, who else knows their secrets, how, when or if you're going to find out. It always sours things between people when that kind of subterfuge is going on.
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