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Reviews for A Mudblood's Treachery. NEW CHAPTER up! Finally.

By : reirei
  • From nailthisheart on December 12, 2007
    ps...^emily is meee! i also have a draco/hermione fic. i'd love to get your opinion!!
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 12, 2007
    funny story. I was looking for a new fic to read, and this caught my interest. I JUST finished reading one of your other stories and I end up becoming totally emmersed in another one of your fics! i got to chapter three before i realized it was you!!! i really enjoy your stories
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 12, 2007
    Uh Oh...I'm starting not to trust Draco now...I actually thought he was being sincere for a minute there....It's official Snape is hot. I enjoyed that little tryst with Millicent...even though I hate her.
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  • From ANON - greendragon on December 11, 2007
    I liked the chapter,it's good Hermione has so manny people looking out for her.I don't know about the Severus/Millecent though,I will always picture him with Hermione,but it works in this story.Can't wait for more.
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  • From jacobslove on December 11, 2007
    YAY UPDATE!!! :D It always makes me so happy when awesome fanfics are updated. Yours is FABULOUS. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2007
    please update!
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 11, 2007
    Another great chapter. I think that Millicent being with Snape is a little strange, but okay because it's different. I can't wait to read more to find out why Hermione is now in Slytherin and why Snape wants her watched.
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  • From Pyroangel198605 on December 11, 2007
    Hermione cant really believe that Draco loves her...please dont make her that daft lol. Besides that great.
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  • From TarnishedAngel on December 08, 2007
    First of all, I would like to applaud you for using a canon version of Blaise rather than the more popular fanon Italian version of him. I don't mind the Italian version if the fic pre-dates Half-Blood Prince where Blaise was finally established as a tall and good looking black boy (I assume British like the rest of them) with high cheekbones. In those earlier fics, writers were just guessing and trying to give the character an identity, and we didn't know any better. Now we do, and the canon version should be the preferred version, but alas the fanon version still persists in newer fics. Personally, I always picture Blaise Zabini as a younger version of Colin Salmon. He is a YUMMY looking black British actor who played MI5 agent Charles Robinson in 3 Pierce Brosnan James Bond films. They were Tomorrow Never Dies, The World is Not Enough, and Die Another Day. This actor is tall and good looking with high cheekbones too. If he were younger, he would make a perfect Blaise. But, I digress.

    Now, I will discuss what I thought of this chapter. Ginny was REALLY annoying, but I LOVE Hermione's reply about "sleeping" with Draco to bring him over to the light side. I'm hoping that she plans to do this with Blaise too. I noticed the F/M/M warning, and I HOPE that means a Draco/Hermione/Blaise menage. To my knowledge, you haven't written one of those yet. And it seemed that you were setting it up in this chapter with both boys promising to protect her. I believe Draco was sincere in his promise whereas Blaise most certainly was playing Hermione, but he can always change, and I've got my fingers crossed that he does so. Also, Hermione shouldn't give up on her friendship with Harry and Ron. They've got their hands full trying to find those horcruxes. I don't think that means that they have deserted her. She should have a little more faith in them, but that could be the grief talking and not her real feelings.

    As an aside, I noticed a small error that bears mentioning. You used hippograph, and the creature is a hippogriff. It may just be a typo. But on the off-chance that it isn't, I thought that I would let you know; so, you could correct it.

    This was another wonderful chapter, and I must say this is my second favorite of your fics after Soft's Pleasure.

    Lastly, I LOVE Blaise comparing Hermione to a Botticelli painting as well as the scene where he discovered the nude Hermione and Draco napping. That was just as steamy as the silencio moment in the previous chapter. I rarely say this, but those two moments tie for the sexiest moment in this fic.

    I eagerly await the next installment of this fic.
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  • From ANON - GREENDRAGON on December 08, 2007
    IF YOUR ONLY GOING TO HAVE TWO FRIENDS LEFT IN THE WORLD WHO BETTER THAN DRACO AND BLAISE?I LOVED THE CHAPTERS THAY KEEP GETING BETTER EVERY TIME YOU WRITE.POOR SEVERUS THOUGH I THINK DRACO IS GOING TO GIVE HIM A HEADACHE.CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!
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  • From TarnishedAngel on December 08, 2007
    I LOVE the idea of another truth telling potion. I LOVE Draco's statement about Hermione being better sexually than Pansy, and I LOVE Hermione's fear of being "ruined for other men" after having had Draco first. The former quote is amusing; the latter qoute is sexy. However, Draco making love to Hermione after casting the silencio on both of them is the sexiest aspect of this chapter as well as my favorite moment in the fic so far. The raw emotion and bare to the bones honesty in that scene were wonderful. Ironically, it seemed they were more truthful with each other when they couldn't speak than when they could. Go figure.

    IMO, this was the best chapter of this fic to date.
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  • From TarnishedAngel on December 08, 2007
    Even if he was under the spell, the tenderness Draco showed Hermione while he claimed her maidenhead was delicious. Dang it all for Snape meddling, and dang Pansy for just breathing much less bringing a swift halt to the Draco/Hermione lovin'. I'd like to hex both Snape and Pansy for that.

    Draco had two wonderful lines in this chapter. The first was asking for permission to kiss Hermione again, and then, lapping her cunny instead of a real kiss (Sigh!!! YUMMY!!!). The second was his amusing quote about how Hermione "boxes like an Amazon" (chuckle).

    I also have a question, or rather I need a clarification. If the potion was given to Draco by his mother to give to Snape, and Draco hid it; then, does that mean he didn't use it himself? I read it like he was just putting it in safekeeping until he could pass it off to Snape and didn't actually use it himself. I may be wrong, and I'm sorry about the question, but I'm a bit unclear on this point. Any light you can shed on this would be appreciated. Thanks!!!

    Another good chapter ReiRei.
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  • From TarnishedAngel on December 08, 2007
    Well, Draco's hard shell cracked a little at seeing Hermione's continuing grief, and that's a good thing. Hermione should be able to lock her bedroom door. That will just be an open invitation to a certain blond Slytherin (heehee). On one hand, this beauty potion is going to be trouble for Hermione, but on the other, it may help solidify the attentions of that blond Slytherin (heehee and Goody!!!); however, I don't like the idea of Draco using magic to enhance his appearance. It ruins the fantasy. Shame on you for doing that. Neville's remark about Snape was cute.
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  • From TarnishedAngel on December 08, 2007
    I just started reading this fic today. I plan to leave a review for each chapter that you've written so far. I have to admit that I'm a bit concerned about the M/F/F warning, but I shall keep an open mind.

    I think that you did an excellent job of revealing Hermione's grief over her parents' murder. My favorite part was when you mentioned Hermione getting a whiff of her father's cologne. That was quite sad, but an excellent way to show her pain.. I also think that a grief-stricken Hermione could kill Bellatrix, and I must admit I was relieved to see her go away. After Ol' Voldy, Bellatrix is my second least favorite character in the HP universe. She is just CREEPY. The violent foreplay between Hermione and Draco was good. And, I like knowing that Snape is really still working for the light side albeit undercover as usual.
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  • From theorgskittles on December 08, 2007
    Damn, this is good I loved the bashing you did of ginny if it was bashing.. I cant wait to read more chapters on this story.. I am likeing it alot.... hehe
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