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By : ScorpioPhoenix
  • From DracosLover on December 16, 2012
    please finish it
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  • From jami_lee on July 17, 2012
    MORE!!! I have to know how it ends.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 19, 2011
    PLEASE update. brilliant!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2010
    love this, would die for an update.
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  • From ANON - n0c on December 16, 2008
    i read this all in one go, so excuse my lack of reviews! keep me up all night, and now it's 11:00am. anyway, great portrayal of characters. i like how harry seems more in control, but also the fire to draco's ice at the same time. the sex scenes are good too ^^ the scenes from the past are more interesting than the present though, and i can kinda see how you're stuck. sorry i can't give any suggestions.. but i do hope you won't scrape this fic!! i'm enjoying it very much. and as much as i secretly love the whole nonchalant harry and increasingly desperate draco moments... i can't wait for when harry finally reciprocates draco's feelings or as least admits them. your fic had me giggling many times. i especially like the scene where teddy turns into mini harry ^^ also harry and draco's first sexual encounter had me literally laughing out loud [the part where draco's spitting out cum and cumming at the same time.. i'm chuckling right now thinking about it] anyway, your work is great, and i hope to read more soon! sorry if my long, rambling review made no sense at all.. i blame the lack of sleep!
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  • From meEksiNs on June 26, 2008
    you have my vote of 5IVE BLOODY STARS for this fic! explosive harry and a 'soothing' draco - an explosive relationship.. i have absolutely no idea WHY u dont have more hits which u deserve for this fic.

    U R NOT NOT DISCONTINUING THIS FIC ARE YOU??!!!

    i wanna what happens to this two in the end! gawd!
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  • From ANON - Luvdonite on June 13, 2008
    please update this story soon. it's so wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2008
    still waiting patiently for an update! I hope you havent given up on this story..I check it all the time! Keep up with it! Its a really good story :)
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  • From ANON - YG on January 18, 2008
    hum... and for some plot... well, they could talk and argue and fight... and then snog, but harry leaves, scared of what he can't control, but when he reaches home he can't stop thinking and goes back to Draco, who is desolated, and then they have hot sex. What harry didn't realice when he left is that Ginny had come back and she saw him flooing to Draco's place. Harry stays the night, he and Draco talk after making ssweet tender love. Harry goes back to his house and finds Ginny waiting for him in front of the floo place, and Draco appears 5 minutes later to hand him his clothes, Harry hadn't realized he had Draco's clothe's on... More bunny plots? ^^ I hope you update soon =) kiss
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  • From ANON - YG on January 18, 2008
    Oh, I hope Draco can make Harry see reason ;_; and that he realices he wasn't perfect either... They love each other too much to let go ;_; *sniff*
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  • From thrnbrooke on January 17, 2008
    Sooo need chapter 8!!! I'm hoping Harry gives into Draco!
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  • From ANON - deadly_sins on January 13, 2008
    Hey! This chapter is good what the heck are you talking about? (BTW, long live SDL!)

    So plot? I don't know. I guess you could have Harry listen to what Draco has to say, toy with him a bit then leave him high and dry. Ginny takes him back but Draco still pursues Harry. And ofcourse there is Blaise. For some reason Ginny goes missing and Harry thinks it Draco goes over and raises hell. Afterwards he finally realise that Draco is innocent and for some reason he needs his help and Harry, Draco Ron and Ernie start on the case. Drama ensues... *shrug* I've got no clue.

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  • From on January 11, 2008
    How can you hate this chapter? I loved it! So wonderful...I hope Draco and Harry can figure something out and I'm oh sooo curious to see how their little purely sex relationship turns into more. Hehe I love this story! Update soon!!!!
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  • From Rettavex on January 11, 2008
    I actually don't think it is a bad chapter at all. It is a little meandering, but otherwise, still keeps the story moving. I think we need to definitely hear the conversation between Draco and Harry (hopefully one of honesty and reconciliation). We also need Ginny to come back into the picture for a moment to help close off that chapter. I think the conversation between Pansy and Draco helps to clarify why Harry could never marry Ginny and live an honest life if he did. He is in love with Draco. It would also be helpful if during a "flashback" we saw Harry fall in love with Draco, a moment when both their pretenses fall, even for a moment, and they see each other for real.

    Just some ideas. I think you are doing fine, and I like this story. I hope you don't scrap it.
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  • From MightyGryffindor on January 11, 2008
    For a hint for the rest of the story, to get you going;

    If I were Draco, I'd let the Wesalette know about all Harrys affairs with Ernie, and possibly others. Everything there is to know. Use an investagator. I'd also let her know that Ron knew all along about his antics thus killing two birds with one stone. Of course Draco would do this without getting caught by having someone else leak her the info or send an annonymous owl, etc.

    Draco should play the Jealousy card with Harry. Piss Harry off by waving a date under his nose of worse comes to worse. Maybe go to the same place Harry and the Wesalette will be. While making him jealous, someone could leak the info to the Wesalette in the girls loo, etc. She leaves him high and dry while he has to watch Draco with another man.

    Harry it seems, wants his cake and eat it too. He never sees any wrong he does, only others. Rules only apply to him when they are convenient. I would set the story so that Draco breaks him of this, and ends up with the prize. A final showdown between Harry and Blaize would be a good one to include. Pansy also needs a lesson about not putting her nose where it don't belong.

    Draco however will have to do something about his wife. Promise to never sleep with her or something. Have a kid by artificial insemination, etc. Then soon as the kid is born, divorce her.

    There's many ways this story could go, I'd finish it if I were you. It's good.
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