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By : ScorpioPhoenix
  • From ANON - Firaga on January 11, 2008
    This chapter didn't suck I dont know what you are talking about! It was bloody brilliant, just like all the others. This story is riveting, don't give up on it!
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  • From ANON - Shel on January 10, 2008
    man, i don't know if i can live through seeing harry and ginny get back together if the same chapter doesn't end with harry going with draco in the present day storyline. The part about draco cradling the stupefied harry was heartbreaking. The entire time i'm reading the chapter, I'm hoping draco would just say he's getting a divorce, just so i can see harry leave ginny and be with draco again.
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  • From ANON - deadly_sins on January 02, 2008
    I love how Harry was clueless about Draco's silent anguish (even though I wanted to smak him). And of course I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to Draco stunning him though!. Angry, sexual tension-filled Harry is a Harry i can forgive! Now alot of dynamics are revealed and we got a glimpse of how their relationship must have been over the years. (Draco subtle manipulation and Harry's near obliviousness to Draco as one with actual feelings. And yet they are a comfort to each other.)Your Harry and Draco's interactions are always fascinating to read.
    (I always love your Harry's; he so hot!) Plus, smoking smex scene ^_~

    HAPPY NEW YEAR!






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  • From ZooArmy on December 30, 2007
    WICKED! JUST WICKED!!! Mwhahaha
    I love it.

    Question: (present time) wouldn't have Draco bloodied Potter's clothes with his wounded hand or was it already dressed by Pansy or is that an important fact for the next chapter????

    Happy New Year, love.
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  • From FallenAngel1129 on December 30, 2007
    omg is all i gotta say....update also comes to mind thouhg :-P
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  • From graballz on December 30, 2007
    Oh my god, Scorpio...YOU UPDATED!!!!! I'm so glad you updated!!!!

    I LOVE THIS!!! I cried when Harry and Draco were talking...and when Harry was going to leave and Draco was trying to stop him!!!!!!! I was like "Harry, can't you just fucking get over yourself and admit that you love Draco back!!! Fuck Ginny! Fuck Felice!!! You two belong together, damn you stupid Gryffindor!!!!"

    and then Pansy started in on him and I was like "GO PANSY YES I LOVE YOU GO BITCH GO"

    "Draco deserves better than you." Well-said, and I really like the way she is sticking up for Draco. I wish I could write her like that, but after DH...I just can't...(or at least I haven't, really) Someone needs to fucking bash Harry over the head with how much he's killing Draco!!!!! GO PANSY GO

    *gasp* There's something Harry doesn't know!!!!! Draco's keeping something from Harry!!!!! WHAT IS IT?!?!?!?! Pansy knows!!!!! It's about Lucius, isn't it? Is it that he's dead? Does Harry know that? Wouldnt' that be in the prophet?????? WHAT??!?!??!!??!??!!??!?! I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    "Little boy lost" I died!!!!!!! *dies* POOR DRACO!!! MY BABY!!!!!!! *sobs*

    Oh. My. God. The sex. I forgot how to type. You'll have to get Harry to interpret this, since he's amazing at understanding incoherence

    ja iowoiaga;oNA; NLKSNL KG;ASMIP'AG J'PA'P J I'wip'a gi'f inasifg ji;oni ;oasfn ogas;noi ga;sn i;ogasoi;as d

    Yeah...that about sums it up! You are fucking incredible, and I love this!!! MORE MORE MORE
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  • From bananasforyou on December 29, 2007
    the ending so sexy!!
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  • From ZooArmy on December 26, 2007
    Yeah Updateness (yes, that's a word now lol)
    You really put them all in a BIG mess, I wonder how long it'll take them to come clean.
    Do you still work from one chapter to the next or do you finally have a plot? (^_^)
    ~Zoo
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  • From graballz on December 26, 2007
    Sorry...I meant that Chapters 1 and 2 riveted me, and Chapter 3 made my brain explode...and then I was trying not to cry during Chapters 4 and 5...oh, and "little dragon"????? Holy SHIT I laughed so hard I couldn't breathe!!! I LOVE IT!
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  • From graballz on December 26, 2007
    Oh my sweet fucking jesus christ holy shit!!!!!! Fuck, SP.....why did it take me so long to read this story??? This is fucking fantastic!!! You've GOT to update again and SOON!!! I have a new "can't wait to read" story...and this is it!!!

    (You can ask Slytherine...I was chatting with her when I clicked on your story...and got hooked!)

    I was riveted after Chapter 1, and Chapter 2...bloody fuck!!! Draco...chocolate...Harry...banana...*brain explodes* I had to clean bits of brain off of the laptop, and my conversation skills definitely weren't working!!! (and they didn't even FINISH in that scene!)

    And holy fucking shit...I was trying SO HARD not to cry during Chapters 4 and 5...and now that I've finished Chapter 5, you HAVE to post more!!! SOON! *sniffle* And as far as "where this should go"...put 'em through all of the angst that you want, as long as they end up together in the end!!! (PLEASE!)

    You are SUCH an amazing writer!!! Dear god in heaven, I now can't wait for your chapter of "12 Inches"!!! Seriously, SP, I love you, and I love this story. I'm now addicted, and it's your fault. YAY!
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  • From bananasforyou on December 26, 2007
    lovely. but poor blaise.
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  • From ANON - Dae on December 26, 2007
    I love this story... I hope you add soon, because I want to see what happenes...
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  • From Rettavex on December 25, 2007
    Oh goody. I have been waiting for an update to this fic. I am so interested in what happens to the players in this story. Poor Blaise. Poor Harry. Poor Ginny. Man, everyone is just getting the shaft, while hoping for love. More please...
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  • From shevien on December 12, 2007
    How could you end it right there?! I mean really, you're driving me crazy with
    anticipation and just when I think I was finally going to get sustenance you yanked
    it about fifty feet away! *pouts* OK, OK, I'll wait for the next chapter.

    ...

    Is it here yet? :]

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  • From thrnbrooke on December 11, 2007
    Soooo need chapter 5!
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