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Reviews for Fire and the Dragon

By : Kimberly1983
  • From MacBeth on December 19, 2007
    I love this story. I was so happy when I saw you had updated. Another great chapter. I love that you're not rushing into the sex but there's still enough tension to make it interesting.
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  • From Angie30 on December 18, 2007
    Very nice, lol Guess old Malfoy isn't going to try and mess with Hermione anymore when he finds out what she did to him. *Giggles* Look forward to an update.
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  • From Delfin on December 18, 2007
    rawr ;)

    this story just keeps getting better :)
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  • From DarqueHart on December 18, 2007
    Um... I do not think of specific days as holidays, and I'm just wondering if Severus is actually aware that the 14th would be Valentine's Day or just an open day on his calendar! I know I said before that he can be romantic, but in his own way, not in any commercial sense. And we all know what he thinks of Valentine's Day.
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  • From DarqueHart on December 18, 2007
    A person could get whiplash from this chapter. Cringing at the classic snarky bastard that Sev is with Harry and whipped into mush over the love starved romantic that Severus can be ... all thanks to you;-) [Well, Sev helped.]
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  • From Amethystique on December 18, 2007
    This fic is fluffier than all the tumble dryer fluff in the UK! But I love it! It's great how the two of them are coming together and building their relationship in increments at a believable pace. As well as the fluff there is angst, drama and bucket loads of emotion that pour out of the screen in waves. I can't wait for the next installment of this gripping work.
    Blessings
    Amethystique x
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 18, 2007
    An excellent chapter. I am glad that she is trying to get Ronald's rights to the baby taken away. I hope that Molly doesn't try to stop Hermione from doing what she feels is right. I am also glad that she agreed to go out with Severus. I think he would make a wonderful father to her little girl. I look forward to reading more soon.
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  • From sappysappysappy on December 18, 2007
    This looks like an interesting story but there's a lot of character background missing here. They just do things without much of an explanation. Why does Ron rape Hermione? Was he violent to her before? Is he a violent drunk? What? And Harry, shouldn't he be surprised at finding his best friend raped Hermione? If not, does that mean he knows Ron is that way? But then why doesn't he think about it, blame himself for not doing anything? Similarly, why does Snape get attached to Hermione? They're not strangers. He knows her well. Her abilities shouldn't surprise him. Well this could work out but he still needs more insight into how Hermione's image changes for him or if he always had special feelings for her.
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  • From Myrna on December 17, 2007
    *Dancing on my chaiR*
    :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 17, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Delfin on December 17, 2007
    awwww on a date, that's so sweet :)

    cant wait to read more
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on December 17, 2007
    omg!@! severus naked!! yum.....poor hermoine, lol, she's gonna have dirty dreams. lol. update soon!
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 17, 2007
    Poor Hermione, walking in on Severus. I hope they can both manage to be around each other after this with being embarassed about it. I loved his reaction to the wrestling. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on December 17, 2007
    I, fortunately, have the same attitude as Snape regarding Wrestling. I used to like it, but the dramatics have gotten to thearatical for me. I miss the wrestling of old...sigh. Anyhow...poor Ron, 80 years with Nott and McNair??? Man, if only the real world would punish sexual violators in such a manner, there'd be no sexual assult in the world.

    Red
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  • From Citten on December 17, 2007
    hahahahahahaha. i sorry but that was funny. :) i have never been one for wresling, but it was fun to have severus reaction. and that he was able to deal with hermione laughting. well now they have a new kettle of fish to deal with now, so what will happen. please update and let us know.
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