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Reviews for Fire and the Dragon

By : Kimberly1983
  • From AriaDragoncrest on December 15, 2007
    Good story so far. You could always have snape and hermione create a potion to make the baby snapes.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 14, 2007
    I like it. Pleae update soon.

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  • From Heidi191976 on December 14, 2007
    Excellent. I am glad that Hermione is keeping the baby. I can't wait to read more soon to see how she and Severus act towards each others now.
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  • From magicalheather999 on December 14, 2007
    AWWW That is so sweet. As much as I love Severus sometimes I wish he wasnt so grumpy and snarky about his past. She just went through a big tramua of course seeing the Dark Mark is going to be a little upsetting. But Great new chapter cant wait for more.
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on December 14, 2007
    aw, severus needs love! this chapter was really sweet! i love this story! update soon!
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  • From crinna on December 14, 2007
    you write well and this fic is well paced and all that but..... it just got to unnaturally PC for my tastes and while this is a land of make believe and magic i like a little realty in the emotions of the players. i don't think i can keep reading. i just want to gag at the way hermione is acting not long after her brutal assault and news of the concept of raising your rapist's child. she doesnt seem to go through any trauma at all.
    OK OK i am sorry i am getting carried away. i do think you have a talent for writing. i understand that you don't want to be held back by sorting through and writing all of the emotion and trauma, and that you want to get back to the good stuff. maybe you could write a chapter that uses sum sort of magic to help the psychological damage she must be going through. things like an altered obviate or some dream magic to help her rebuild . i don't intend to be cruel. sorry if i come off that way.
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  • From Citten on December 14, 2007
    well this could be lots of fun! she has had feels for him for years! boy this is good. now i love that she wanted him to stay and i love that he enjoyed waking next to her. i wonder what manvera will say when she finds out! oh please dont have her bursting in any time soon or at all would be nice. now do update soon and dont let chapter 13 take too long. :)
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  • From Citten on December 14, 2007
    well what will they do now!? more accureately how will they act? now i really hope that things go well. he has got to let the some of the old past go. i hope hermione can help. stupid ron-boy he is a right ass! (excuse the language-he just makes me so made!) well now how will things go i am going to die waiting i know. :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 14, 2007
    I like it. Pleae update soon.

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  • From NightDragon07 on December 14, 2007
    Hey its just me again. I just noticed that you said you married a Navy guy? So that makes us two miltiary wives? I'm married to a Army man, and in away he is just like Severus, very snarky with everyone but me, and then he's the most kindest, gentlest man I know. But I wanted to say I loved the new chapter, and it was good! I like how both changed and even at times it wuold be nice to see Severus that way with her but only alone of course!
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  • From WitchatHeart77 on December 14, 2007
    hehe I try to review the story in its entirety at the end, but this chapter just had me to tears... I love rain.
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  • From RWHandLoraineProductions on December 13, 2007
    A very nice and slightly sappy scene. LOL. I really loved it. The rain washing away the tears...very nice.

    Red
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  • From shelagh on December 13, 2007
    Great job
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  • From CarlaRush on December 13, 2007
    I love what you are doing! Pesonally, I think she should keep the baby and drain Ron dry on child support, medical expenses and anything else she can get.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 13, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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