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Reviews for Fire and the Dragon

By : Kimberly1983
  • From kinkyfairy33 on December 13, 2007
    as usual, your story is amazing. i love it! i'm glad to see hermoine is going back to her normal self, and pregnant!! omg!! what's gonna happen? update soon!
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  • From NightDragon07 on December 13, 2007
    I just read your story and I think its wonderfully done! I can't wait to read the next chapter(s). Keep up the good work!!
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  • From DarqueHart on December 13, 2007
    Um, another little mistake... shortly after Hermione redecorated Harry's person, Severus calls her Mr. Granger. Now I know Severus wouldn't have made that mistake, so it must have been you! But don't worry yourself about it, pregnancy makes us a little crazy.
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  • From Angie30 on December 13, 2007
    I laughed myself silly when she threw up all over Harry! Great job at the drama and then mix it with a touch of humor. Brillant.
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  • From GypsyWitch on December 13, 2007
    I simoply love this story! I check back several times a day to see if it's been updated. It's so nice to read a new chapter before bed, and then wake up to find another one! :)

    Brilliant work!

    -Sari
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  • From pattilarr on December 13, 2007
    I rarely review on this site, but this is one of my favorite stories in a long time!! I love the updates and the story itsself - I'm NOT a Ron fan. LOL
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  • From DarqueHart on December 13, 2007
    Found a minor flub ... In the part with Mr. Finnegan, you wrote: 'Hermione could see that the boy was getting angry. Silently she chuckled at the memories of losing herself getting caught.' The second line doesn't make sense. Also, at the end of that paragraph, you didn't capitalize Mr. Filch's name.

    Sharing a bathroom! Oh yuck! :( I hate bathrooms with two doors. Always feel like someone's going to barge in.
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 13, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From crinna on December 13, 2007
    i am enjoying this fic but i cant believe she is going to keep the parasitic spawn of that ginger twit Ron. one shouldn reward and propagate rapists. their genetic material should die with them............sorry i had to get that out good story keep on writing. but please don't go too sappy, after all you wrote such a powerful and dramatic rape seen you should give the same care to realism for her current unwanted situation.
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  • From DarkDragon05 on December 13, 2007
    Wow,, Oh my God I didn't expect Hermione to get pregnant. That was unexpected. Good job in keeping us in suspense and coming up with different ideas. Keep up the googd work and update soon.
    -DarkDragon05
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  • From chickaboo on December 12, 2007
    Oh no. Poor Hermione. At least she has Severus there for her. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From Angie30 on December 12, 2007
    Whoa! Now that is an interesting twist, I had a feeling she was pregnant. I was horribly sick through my first pregnancy, not fun but the end result was worth all the crap I had to deal with. lol
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  • From Citten on December 12, 2007
    you are a trooper to have a little one and still find time for us, thanks! well i enjoy the fact that she 'clings' to severus i rather enjoy it. i think he does too. he will be the best thing for her, for he does not tolerate some things-her been cowardly about somethings will just not do. boy will he use her gryondorness agaist her-this is going to be fun to watch! :) well until next time!
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  • From Myrna on December 12, 2007
    Yay! I really enjoy your story! :) You are a very good writter and I'm sure you're a very good momy too! ;)
    Cannot wait to read what'll happend...
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 12, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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