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Reviews for Fire and the Dragon

By : Kimberly1983
  • From Jocelyn25 on December 10, 2007
    uhhh ron is in serious trouble ! GOOD!!! *g
    And yeah Severus, try to sell that story to yourself..it wont work forever ;)
    We alllll know why you do that! ;)
    Wonderful, i cant wait to see how it develops and (being the true shipper that i am) cant wait to see how Hermione reacts to find severus so caring ;)

    Love, and thanks
    Jocy
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  • From ginnyginny on December 10, 2007
    interesting story... i'm looking forward to seeing where you will take this!
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  • From starupinthesky on December 10, 2007
    Wow. I love this story it is very intriguing and you do a great job of hooking your reader.
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  • From DarqueHart on December 10, 2007
    Thank You;) -- This is just picky stuff... at the top of the page where your A/N are, double space down to the chapter. Then start your chapter number, why not add the chapter title since you have titles, and then double space [at the least] again before you start the actual first line of the chapter. Presentation is always nice!

    [In ch.1, you have Ginny at the party twice.]
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  • From DarqueHart on December 10, 2007
    Write your story. It has merit. But, please, do not fall into that crap about holding the story ransom for so many reviews. Write because you want to! Begging for reviews is so juvenile and really makes me turn off to the story and the author.
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  • From Angie30 on December 10, 2007
    Evil Cliff Hanger! I can't wait to read more of this wonderful story. When ever one finds out it was Ron that had done this to her, he better have is running shoes on lol. Especially if Snape gets a hold of him.
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  • From magicalheather999 on December 10, 2007
    OMG what an evil cliffhanger!!! I cant wait for more. Please update soon!!!!
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  • From kinkyfairy33 on December 09, 2007
    this is an amazing story so far!! oh please update soon! does ron remember what he did?
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  • From chickaboo on December 09, 2007
    Now why would you be so evil as to leave it at that? I'm on the edge of my seat, seriously I am. I really like this story, good drama, great writing, is it any wonder I'm hooked and begging for more? I have to know, do they find out it was Ron? (The smarmy bastard) Anyway, can't wait to see everyone's reactions now that they know it's Hermione. Can't wait for the next update, keep up the great work!
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  • From starupinthesky on December 09, 2007
    Very nice. I like your writing very much. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From Sampdoria on December 09, 2007
    First of all, I must admit that fic's that allows Ron, or any other culprit, to sucsess in raping Hermione, usually annoys the hell out of me. Rape is such a degree of pain and humiliation on the victem, and most authors tends to let the culprit get away with way to little in terms of punichment, letting the rape being a major part of the story, while punishing the offender is of less importance. So far, your story is to "young" to make a jugdement in that department, so I still hope that you will let the punishment fit the crime? The plot has been done quite a few times before, but then again, by now most plots have been done once or twice before and they can still bring a new story for the readers.
    I will follow your story, and I hope that you will bring satisfaction in the department of punishing Ron. I ask you to not let Ron get anywhere near her, to let him getting away with more now will have a very depressing effect on me:-)) Hopefully Harry will be smart enough to add two and two together and be suspicious about what Ron did after they parted ways.
    Update again soon!
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  • From CarlaRush on December 09, 2007
    I love it! Keep going this is too good to set aside!
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  • From Jocelyn25 on December 09, 2007
    Wow, this is a promising start. I love fics where Ron is the bad and Severus the good guy seeking revenge ;)
    My own twisted mind enjoys this ;)
    Anyway, i am so looking forward to how this will continue.
    Good luck with your pregnancy.
    Jocy
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  • From Stratyllis on December 09, 2007
    You need to get a beta and learn to break up paragraphs. A paragraph should not be a whole screen long. It makes the story too hard to read.
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  • From chickaboo on December 09, 2007
    Well I like it. Very interesting start. I can't wait to see where you go from here. Well done!
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