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Reviews for The Storm

By : StarKneazle
  • From LadyTygress on September 16, 2023

    I know it's too much to ask for but I hope you see this review and know how incredible a writer you are. I'm glad to have come across it and happy that you were able to write as much as you did. Hope you are doing well.


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  • From ANON - on September 17, 2016

    Would really love to know what's next


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  • From ANON - Kerry on January 01, 2016
    If nothing else you can write great sex scenes with a few minor exceptions. However you had Severus practically rape Hermione in front of Lucius who does nothing. You crossed a line there and quite frankly rape doesn't do Shit for me unlike your other reviewers, clearly.Shameful,there are No proper apologies given and she runs after them? Not something normal ppl would do. She has No self respect and definitely requires professional help. Your story doesn't work,it helps that they are so out of character because of that act of violation, that it's not believable and plain down disturbing. Normally ooc's aren't quite so unpalatable, you prove the opposite easily. I would thank you to not share any other stories....
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  • From ANON - Diane on November 22, 2014
    Omg please don't be dead or anything! Then I'd have no hope of getting to read more, which sounds terribly greedy I suppose, but this is sooooo good! And hot. Very very hot. Lol so please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ldeetz on January 13, 2013
    I really hope you continue this story!
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  • From Rosajean on July 29, 2012
    Please please continue! Pretty pretty please!!
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  • From Rosajean on March 31, 2012
    This story is amazing!!! But it hasn't been updated for several years...are you planning on ever finishing it? Pretty please continue! I'm dying to see if and how Hermione reconciles with Severus and Lucius!
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  • From DB1 on October 05, 2011
    @11 Omg I absolutely love this story!! Please update soon!!
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  • From MaskedLily on November 13, 2010
    I absolutely love this story!!!!! Please please please please please write more!!!!! I really want to know where this goes and what happens to everyone!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!
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  • From cathyhester on April 12, 2009
    Just found your story, really like it. Hope you'll continue.
    Would love Sev playing sub in apology.
    Anyhow, thanks for writing.

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  • From catysmom1028 on January 29, 2009
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From Elphaba on January 28, 2009
    I forgive you for the delay, but great chapter!
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  • From alina290 on January 27, 2009
    I turned to my favorite adult site for hp and so surprised to see you posted the next chapter to this fave of mine. I hope you had a good Holiday Season. I know it is already the end of January and all, but you did not show any trace of life over the course of them. Look forward to the next chapter.
    Liz
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  • From ANON - Pianita on January 27, 2009
    You need Severus to pay for his transgression, and in the process learn to give-up control???!!! Hey, it could happen, besides Lucious and Herms need to get some spanking time too. Yes, please continue to write, i can't wait to see how is Ron getting his heart broken....
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  • From Sampdoria on January 27, 2009
    First of all: Thank you so much for the update!! Seccond, no matter how mad I still am at Severus for what he did, and annoyed at Lucius for not doing anything to stop him, there is absolutely nothing that will ruin this story more effectively for me than letting Ron put his slobbering lips and disgusting hands anywhere near Hermiones body. I am totally allergic to the Ron/Hermione pairing, and I don't want Hermione to even consider Ron to be anything more than a past lover and for now a friend. Please, please, please don't ruin a wonderful story by letting Ron for one seccond getting the impression that Hermione wants him back, please make her smart enough, and strong enough, to in no way giving Ron signals that migth imply that she would welcome his advances.
    Severus have a lot to pay for, what he did was beyond cruel, I am not even sure if he deserves to be forgiven, but better him than Ron (just the idea of Ron is gross)
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