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Reviews for The Storm

By : StarKneazle
  • From oliversangel on November 18, 2008
    Oh love, don't give a fig about what readers say to you about updating frequently. Real Life is a bitch, (a cunt actually, as I have come to find out recently) and as shocking as it is, us writers DO have a life outside of AFF.NET. Take your time. A well written story is worth waiting for. Don't worry about losing readers. Some of the stories I read go 2-3 weeks, and sometimes a month in between updates. You will not lose readers, I promise. Most of us are loyal. Sadly, I have finished this story, but I am off to peruse the plethera of other works you have published. SO, no worries. I loved this story. I have only read one other Lucius/Severus/Hermione before, it was a one shot, in the dark in a club, and it was so hot. I was pleased to find this one. As odd a pairing it is, I like it. I will be patiently waiting for an update love!! XXOO
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  • From alina290 on November 17, 2008
    I had been avoiding this story for some time already although I had read part of the first chapter. I am up date on what you have so far written. I like your style. Keep up the good work.
    Liz
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  • From nastygrl on November 16, 2008
    Oh god, I just freaking love this story! I adore Severus, angsty, angry, bitter and all. And Lucius, the tall blond gorgeous man. Who wouldn't want to be Hermione?

    I can't wait to read what happens next!
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  • From ANGELWINGZ1983 on November 16, 2008
    I am so loving your writing and I'm patiently waiting for your next post. Keep up the good, although sometimes, hard work. I should know. Feel free to read my offerings to the site- Bewaer the Billowy Cape of Doom; a Mauraders/Phantom of the Opera crossover and my current fic, Ravenrin & Slytherclaw; a bit of naughtiness me and my friend came up with a while ago and have only just got round to writing.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on November 15, 2008
    Hmmm, things are getting interesting...I think Harry knows what's up...lol@Ron being oblivious, probably for the best, lord knows how he'd react. I wonder if Severus really is ready to make amends properly and can he really share, like share share. lol. I like Lucius in this story a lot. He's kinda sweet there at the end...Awww. Can't wait to see how Sev proceeds. More please : )
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  • From Clare1984 on November 13, 2008
    Who wouldn't have fun saying Mwhua ha ha? Although the evil might be coming in the next chapter depending on what happens to Severus and Lucius next. I think Harry is too savvy to let anything go past him and I'm sure he'll be quizzing Hermione soon.

    Pretty Girl is in my favourites to read so I'll be sure to leave a review.
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  • From Elphaba on November 13, 2008
    Seriously cliffhangers suck! Great chapter though
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  • From Heidi191976 on November 13, 2008
    This was great. I hope that Lucius and Severus return from their meeting with Voldemort and that Severus will apologize to Hermione for what he did to her. Then they can all be together again. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From vampgrl23 on November 07, 2008
    I've read quite a few SS/HG/LM stories, but this one is definately one of the best! Update soon!
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  • From Nikte on October 29, 2008
    WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! This is a great story, I couldn
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  • From jddammann on October 29, 2008
    Both chapters were excellent, but I have to admit feeling "saved" somehow by the ending of this one. You had me worried for a while about Severus, Lucius, and Hermione. Although I know they are dangerous men, they also have a good side and that is what I was hoping would show up again. I hope she forgives them after a lot of self-examination on all of their parts. That didn't come out the way I intended! (LOL) I'm sure you know what I really meant. :-)

    It is going to be a difficult relationship between them, but I hope it will be a good relationship in the end. I see a future for Lucius and Hermione with Severus and more so for Severus with Lucius and Hermione. Then of course there is the relationship between Lucius and Hermione and Lucius and Severus. I want them all to work out! :-) Loving the story, and for what ever reason, loving the updates!
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  • From ANON - vick on October 28, 2008
    keep updating moree!Like once a week!!
    the story is greatt!
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  • From ANON - Lilalandra on October 28, 2008
    I like your story a lot. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Elphaba on October 27, 2008
    I am impressed no porn ;) Wonderful Chapter! I was hoping you would make Sev realize he was an ass!
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  • From ANON - maddie50 on October 27, 2008
    Lucius and Severus both seem to have fallen for Hermione, but will she forgive them? I suppose Severus did not want anyone to witness him being tender and Lucius does as he is told as far as Severus is concerned, until now. What next?
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