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Reviews for The Storm

By : StarKneazle
  • From ANON - Olive on October 26, 2008
    you are amazing!

    I like the way that Snape really doesn't understand what he has done wrong, and had to be shown with a memory. I wish it were that easy to explain to people in real life.
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on October 26, 2008
    How do you do that? You manage to be funny as hell, erotic, and effectively angsty at the same time! This was a fab update, I'm glad they're both beginning to really value her, especially Sev. LOL@at poor confused Ron...at least Harry is beginning to notice something is up. I wonder what the reaction will be when the shit hits the fan. This was funny as hell:
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  • From voraciousreader on October 26, 2008
    Hit him again, Lucius!
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on October 26, 2008
    The Dark Lord has such bad timing! Glad that Snape realised what he did. Now he can hopefully do something about it, before it is too late. Great chapter!
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  • From Heidi191976 on October 26, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more soon. I hope that Lucius and Severus will be able to apologize to Hermione so that they can all be together again.
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on October 24, 2008
    omg i cant believe those 2...such chldish behavior. hurting her like that i hope they get the hexing they diserve for hurting her so.
    i hope hermione gives both of them a peace of her mind and maybe even denies their please for her. grrrr...

    aewsoem fic by the way! cant wait till u upload to read more on this!!
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  • From SirStalkingwarrior on October 24, 2008
    omfg o.0 yesh chappy 7 was just wowzerzz!!!! hot, sexy suductive, intense! amazing fic cant wait to read the rest
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  • From Terrie on October 18, 2008
    This has been a very hot story that just got more interesting. Hermione has been emotionally hurt by both men. I know all the things I would like to say to both of them if it had been me so I'm anxious to see what Hermione is going to do or say. Age should equate to maturity but as we all know that isn't always true and these two just proven that. I say it would serve them right if Kingsley, Remus or some other man offering her comfort, platonic or otherwise, and cut them both off.
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  • From jddammann on October 15, 2008
    Loving the story as always! Wondering what Severus or Hermione will make what happened ok, or tolerable. Lucius should not have been there, Severus and Hermione should have had some time. Anyway, still loving the story.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on October 13, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From nastygrl on October 13, 2008
    How is Hermione going to ever forgive Severus for this? How is he going to justify this to himself, Hermione and Lucius? He should turn his anger on Lucius, next. That would be some hot sex! Can't wait to read where you go next!
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  • From Shalengreh on October 13, 2008
    more please
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  • From dynonugget on October 11, 2008
    Congratulations!

    Your story has been nominated for 'Best Threesome' at the Smutastic Awards on LiveJournal!

    To accept your nomination, please reply to smutasticawards at yahoo dot com by October 16th.

    Regards,
    Dynonugget, Smutastic Awards Moderator
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  • From ANON - Lynn on October 11, 2008
    I read all 8 chapters of The Storm today and I just wanted to take a moment to compliment you on a very well written hot story. I love your characterizations of Hermione, Severus and Lucius and I can't wait to read mor.
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  • From Cathartesaura on October 10, 2008
    ooh, I'm so glad you're continuing with this! It is such a great dynamic you've got going with the three of then, I can't wait to see how it plays out.
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