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Reviews for The Storm

By : StarKneazle
  • From ANON - nyxus on September 04, 2008
    *gurgle, drool
    ahem, sorry about that, kinda lost all thought process after reading that hot story, if there's anything i love it's Lucius/Hermione/Snape, they have got to be the hottest threesome couples that ever existed, and your story just... it's undescribable. You had all their personalities and even had a plot
    aplauds to you =]
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  • From faerieflightz on August 17, 2008
    Wow! OMG this story is AMAZING! I can't wait for a new chapter! Do you have any idea how long this story is going to be? I would also like to say that you have a wonderful writing style and you have absolutely the best smut I have ever had the pleasure to read. Keep updating!....please
    A new diehard fan
    Tiffany
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  • From CoCoM on August 10, 2008
    (Hope you are improved now and back to 100%)
    This is really interesting-I am wondering where this will end up as far as will Hermione be with Lucius OR Severus in the end? Or will it be Lucius AND Severus? Either way, I am enjoying the "ride"! *sniggers*
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  • From CoCoM on August 10, 2008
    Oh.My.Word!! That was....just...wow, yeah. What a steamy chapter. Delicious!
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  • From CoCoM on August 10, 2008
    This fic is H.O.T.!! Yowsa. The whole Snape/Malfoy element is just delectable and then to throw Hermione in there as well....yeah, VERY nice! I am very interested to read more.
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  • From ANON - bluedecor on August 09, 2008
    I'm sorry that you have been berated for not writing according to someone else's schedule. I find it astounding that readers give authors a hard time about the posting of the entertainment that writers provide for us for free! Besides, sometimes one must wait on one's muse.


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  • From GuiltyPleasure on August 02, 2008
    I love the way this story is heating up. The character seem very real to me.
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  • From ANON - sexysarah on August 01, 2008
    I love your story! Very, very nice... Also, cookies for you for your note, it's hard for me too, with two kids under two, I barely get time to write. If readers can't get that, too bad, you come first! (they're good cookies too, homemade with chocolate chips and oatmeal!) Keep up with your passions, Sarah
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  • From ANON - morganabythesea on July 31, 2008
    Excellent chapter! :-) Thank you for your reply. My worries are only aimed at authors who never continue their stories, not authors that write on their own schedule. Believe me, I understand real life schedules too. I am more than happy to wait for your updates because you write so well and because I know that the updates will come.

    Thanks again for sharing.


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  • From Cathartesaura on July 30, 2008
    I forgot to mention. My favorite part is when Lucius and Snape stop in the middle of a blowjob to make sure she's alright. That was surprisingly sweet and I loved it. I hope you'll forgive me for reviewing twice . . .
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  • From Cathartesaura on July 30, 2008
    Oooh, this is soo good. I always like relationship fics featuring more than two people (maybe that's just my commitment issues popping up), and I love how you handle this: you keep it hot, but you show the real feelings that each of them have for the others - love how Hermione affects the relationship between Sev and Lucius. Love the way all the relationships developing. Great work!
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  • From ANON - Lyssander on July 30, 2008
    I just wanted to say that I dont care how often you write...I'm just glad that you share your talent with us. I love your story and am glad that I found it.
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  • From ANON - olive on July 30, 2008
    I am very glad that you take the time to write quality. this story in particular is very well written and i am enjoying it very much.
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  • From Heidi191976 on July 30, 2008
    Another great chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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  • From dynonugget on July 20, 2008
    Merlin's Pants this is HOT~!

    And you can thank SoftObsidian74 for sending me to you! Your stories came highly recommended, and she wasn't wrong!

    I like how you reversed the usual Lucius as a dom - makes it very interesting. Hermione's one lucky witch!
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