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Reviews for Asylum

By : lazycrazykitten
  • From twistaddicted on July 30, 2008
    This is a great story - thanks.
    BTW there are still quite a few errors of spelling etc but the story is interesting and good enough that even picky old me can ignore them - well, okay, almost ignore them. LOL
    BTW No 2 - I do so agree with you about writers complaining about short reviews. Sometimes, even though you might like to write more, you just cannot think of anything to write other than that you have enjoyed the fic. When authors beg for more reviews, especially when they threaten to stop writing unless such and such a number of people review, well I find that just makes me not want to read the story any longer.
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  • From twistaddicted on July 30, 2008
    This fic is very entertaining. Thanks for a great read. Only one complaint - the chapters are too short! LOL
    Oh, actually I've just remembered that I have two other 'complaints', well, not complaints really, ,they are just little niggling things - the first is your word 'anyways' - no Briton would ever put an 's' on the end of it, that just screams; 'American person talking or thinking, he cannot be an Englishman!' The other thing is that you refer to Snape as the 'Potion's Master' and that should be 'Potions Master' i.e. there should not be an apostrophe between the 'n' and the 's; in the word Potions.
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  • From ANON - Lilith Rose on July 29, 2008
    love the story so far. keep it up, I really hope this doesn't turn into one of those stories you get really into but never gets finished. anyway great work!
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  • From darkwish on July 29, 2008
    one big huge AWWWW :) I can't wait to see more it's very well written and oh so gooshy good :)
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  • From Mizzfreestyle on July 29, 2008
    Oh, this chapter was so cute. Enjoyment factor 10 out of 10. It's usually the sweet, innocent kisses that keep readers at the edge of their seats and wanting more. Give 'em a treat, and they keep coming back. Thank you for udpating. It's been quite a bit. Please udate sooner, and do you have a mailing list?
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  • From KaeXLi on July 28, 2008
    great job
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  • From anniea on July 28, 2008
    okay you're gonna make me act like the teenager that i am. AAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWwww!!!! you're gonna have harry kidnapped aren't you? please update soon *kisses*
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  • From serenagold on July 28, 2008
    Awesome chapter. ^^


    So the death eaters thing Harry's Snape's love child, eh? Wont they be surprised at the violent (and perhaps magical) side of Mr. Augustine. >:) mwahahahahaha
    I can't wait. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - luna love on July 28, 2008
    Excellent story! I love reading it :D Please update soon!


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  • From Hambares on July 28, 2008
    Good story! I just found this one and am enjoying it! I hope there will be more soon!
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  • From Nigellica on July 28, 2008
    Awww! Yay! Do we get more twin action in the next one? They're so much fun ^_^
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  • From ANON - amysds on July 19, 2008
    Hey, you know I love your fic. Anyhow I came across someone who is using your main idea. I haven't seen them give you credit yet - but I have only gotten to like second chapter. It's called An Insane Potter? by DebsTheSlytherinSnapeFan It just reminded me of your story so much I thought I'd mention it. Who knows it may veer off after this chapter
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  • From ANON - Brashen on July 03, 2008
    Thx for a wonderful story
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  • From darkwish on July 01, 2008
    ooooooo! Snape is going to FLIP OUT if old voldie hurt harry :P at least he would in my mind, i've always had the impression if someone hurt someone snape loved.....that was IT you were going DOWN one way or another.
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  • From serenagold on June 29, 2008
    Ha! They think Harry's a squib love child!! ^^ Excellent.

    I can't wait to see what happens next!
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