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Reviews for Playing Doctor

By : AlexisRose
  • From reirei on December 21, 2007
    AlexisRose - Thank you for reviewing Maelstrom. I do so hope that you read TIME LOST, honestly, its my personal favorite and I think despite a few grammar issues in the begining, it is most other peoples favorite as well. Even those who hate snape/hermione pairings, weirdly.

    Back to your story...




    Dont listen to those reviewers that may be telling you to change it etc. You DONT have to change a thing if you dont want too. I like the dark parts because its seemed real and tragic.

    If you want to write an alternative ending, be my guest but jsut dont be discouraged by reviews telling you to change this story!!!!

    It's hard enough to write on here, without being told that your story is good, but needs a different ending?? Come on. Your brillant, and I hope you know that.


    Nuff said'


    Reirei.

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  • From GMW on December 21, 2007
    You want a suggestion for an alternate ending... It could be that Draco and Hermione are actually seeing each other and that Hermione and/or Draco has a doctor/rape fantasy and the other is more than willing to oblige. They could have set up a "safe" word that really means stop... since words like "no", "stop", "don't touch me" etc. would be used in a rape fantasy.
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  • From Delfin on December 21, 2007
    ohhhhhhh man poor Draco :(

    but i really liked this story :)

    hope u write a new one in the future :]
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  • From bananasforyou on December 20, 2007
    on the verge of crying. omg need alternate ending please!!!
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  • From ANON - Aeriea on December 20, 2007
    Wonderfully written!! I applaud you for writing it so beautifully.
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  • From DawnOfTheDead on December 20, 2007
    Ohhhhhh!!!!! I love dark... Great second chapter. So descriptive that I could see it happening as if I was standing there in the room!
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  • From reirei on December 20, 2007
    I thought this was a very well written and gutwrenching two shot and despite the sad ending, it really made my morning. Absolutely recommendable!
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  • From mirrorofrapture on December 20, 2007
    that was intense. i love this two-shot. i must admit that i was disgusted with draco. i couldn't believe what he did, but you made it... not understandable... (i guess i'm not coming up with the right word...) anyways, i think that it was a good thing that you redeemed draco's character in the end. it just made it more real for me.
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  • From ANON - Warden on December 20, 2007
    Well, Draco died in the end, which is okay if little underwhelming. Some more suffering on his part would have been nice. Personally, the more gruesome and painful Draco's (or any rapist's) death, the better as far as I'm concerned.

    Humanizing him at the end there and having Hermione forgive him wasn't my cup of tea. Just because his mother cries over him is no reason for his rape victim to suddenly decide he was human. This takes place a scant two days, TWO DAYS, after she was raped. Hardly enough time for her to even consider forgiveness. Frankly, I'm surprised she even attended. One would think she'd be in the hospital wing or her dorm room, rather than attending HIS memorial. I can't see the rest of the trio there lamenting his passing either, unless attendance was compulsory. Even then, I'm sure Hermione would have been excused.

    And forgiving Draco because his accidental, oath-driven, suicide prevented Dumbledore's death is crazy; two wrongs do NOT make a right. Draco not being able to facilitate an attack on the school and headmaster, simply because he had an accident while perpetrating a rape, is not grounds for forgiveness. It's a reason to resurrect him so he can be tortured for a few hours, then killed again.

    Don't get me wrong though, you stepped up to the plate and (sort of) punished Malfoy, which is something most authors here (and elsewhere) rarely do. So, umm, kudos for that.
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  • From ANON - chyara on December 20, 2007
    I guess i am a bit confused. What killed him? that should be explained more i think.
    otherwise i rather liked this fic. Can't wait to read what else you have planned.
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  • From wudelfin on December 20, 2007
    I have to admit I didn't like this fic, overdone. But the ending redeemed it, very well done
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  • From ANON - nope on December 15, 2007
    PLEASE CONTINUE! hes not too evil, I want to know what happens....!
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  • From ANON - Monique on December 15, 2007
    Brilliant! Ha, I knew something was up with the healer! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Amy on December 14, 2007
    I like crazy Psycho Obsessed with Hermione Draco/....make him like that...lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 13, 2007
    this story is hot please continue
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