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Reviews for Playing Doctor

By : AlexisRose
  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2010
    I enjoyed this better, the alternate with her memories changed. I was sad when you killed Draco in the other chapter!
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  • From jaceni50 on January 11, 2010
    Well, since this is the fanfiction world I love the alternate ending. So much better than the realistic (even though not so realistic) ending. The way it was posed in the alternate ending sounds as if there is a sequal in the making? I'm on board with that. :)
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  • From Serranna on January 09, 2010
    Yes Yes Yes!!!! Write more smut!!!

    Loved your alternate ending. Dirty Dr. Draco was too hot!!

    I can tell you, as someone who loves to write (and read, don't forget about the reading) smut, that you're very good at it!
    Although I know what you mean about the difficulty of writing it. You really reveal much more of yourself writing the sexual stuff.

    Now I'm going to read the intended version.

    Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2010
    I THINK I LOVE YOUR ALTERNATIVE ENDING BETTER! I JUST CAN'T THINK DRACO DEAD. GREAT ALTERNATIVE ENDING, SERIOUSLY. IT WAS GREAT!!! I LOVED IT!!!
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  • From mhaj78 on January 02, 2010
    So let's be honest, I didn't think it could get any better than chapter 2 (though I was sorry he died even if he was a rapist), but then I read CHAPTER 3!! OMG, I do not know how you come up with these amazing ideas, but I absolutely love it. Freaking brilliant! Thanks so much!
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  • From on January 02, 2010
    Add all the endings you want! Don't worry, your smut was very naughty :) I'm a fan of happy endings, so this is my favorite ending. Of course, a little angst every now and again is fun to read. Please do write more!
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  • From margotlefaye on January 02, 2010
    While I had always found the original ending powerful, it had also always struck me as not being of a piece with the humorous tone the first chapter starts out with: Hermione's thoughts that she's about to be prodded by someone who hasn't even had the the decency to buy her dinner, first is funny, and her annoyance with Malfoy, at the same time she thinks he's become very attractive, if even more annoying than ever, seems to set us up for one type of fic, while chapter two delivers an entirely different type of fic. I considered that something of a flaw in an otherwise compelling fic. The third chapter, of course, meshes far better with the original tone. The forgetfulness potion is a brilliant touch, because we aren't really witnessing a rape, we're witnessing completely consensual sex between a boyfriend and a girlfriend in an established relationship where she's told him a fantasy and he's going along with her to live it out. So, well done on all counts. The original ending is unique, tragic and horrifying but the alternate ending is fantastic and a lot of fun.
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  • From circe266 on January 02, 2010
    Thanks for posting the alternate ending. I remember being a little bummed out by the other ending, although I enjoy the story very much both ways.
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  • From flamingmoth on January 02, 2010
    I actually liked both of these, with their very different twist endings. Good work!
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  • From ANON - Potterentourage on January 02, 2010
    Awesome alternate! I loved the disturbing previous one too, so bravo on both counts! Aww, they were having an sekrit affair! *cuddles D/Hr*
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  • From ichiruki on March 07, 2008
    wow, read both chapters was not expecting that...kudos though, I think it was awesome, so I must be a sicko perv, so can I read the alt ending? lol. Can't wait to see what that will be like ;)
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  • From lafemxtina on March 05, 2008
    I love this story! I do hope you do write an alternate version...simply because this rocked! Whatever you write I'm sure is gonna be great. It would be a shame if you changed your mind about it.
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  • From ANON - a-muse-ing on January 28, 2008
    "So what do you think? Should I continue? I don
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  • From ANON - claudia on December 27, 2007
    I hope alexisrose will read this and email me to acknowledge reading this

    A happier ending could be one where malfoy stops himself before raping Hermoine. he could take liberties or lick her and do outer-course activities. He could express remorse. and maybe at the end of the story, as an epilogue, hermoine could consent to have intercourse with him because she has perhaps endometriosis and no wizarding healing has helped her. so she wants to get pregnant and Draco admires her enough to want that too. the end of the story could be very fluffy with the 2 of them discussing getting engaged or just promising to be loving towards each other.
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  • From luvhp on December 21, 2007
    Okay, well done. Sad, but hey, it's your fanfic. I agree on the whole, "how do you make it happy since he raped her" immediately I thought of Luke & Laura on Gen Hops. LOL Yes, showing my age a bit, my mother watched that show religiously and so fdid my step-mother, so no matter where I was, it was on, LOL,. Anway, my point being, fanfiction, alot like soaps, are NOT REAL! So, hopefully people won't be too mean in their reviews, you told them up front in was N/C.
    Love to see the alt ending as well.
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