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Reviews for Mastering Temptation

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From ANON - poet_lover on January 09, 2008
    I absolutely loved this story. I would have reviewed sooner, but I have been ill. And I haven't had the opportunity to read the last few chapters until now. I love the Snape/Hermione pairing. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Keep up the excellent work!!
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  • From ANON - loveeyourhatee on January 09, 2008
    great story.
    can't wait for the next one!!
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  • From ASwanson on January 09, 2008
    Loved the story as always!
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  • From Sampdoria on January 09, 2008
    Absolutely brilliant! I loved it and I can't wait for the wedding night:-))
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  • From Tenar10r on January 09, 2008
    SQUEE! I loved the wedding! that was great!
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  • From dolphindreamer on January 09, 2008
    I must say I really enjoyed that chapter especially. Poor Draco having to first try to get her into her dress then help her go to the washroom. I found that hillarious. I thought it funny with the Harry getting the boquet as well and Lucius being a sweetheart. Though I'm always estatic when you update, as you're my favourite author on this site. Anyways keep up the great work!
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  • From Gertie on January 09, 2008
    Sweet angel! Everytime I check here lately there are new chapters waiting for me. And both a proposal and a wedding to boot! You are my favorite person today.
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  • From ANON - aliciana on January 09, 2008
    Hello Snape-Goddess. What brilliant chapters. I must be lucky with the time difference that shows two chapters in a matter of hours. So he's made an honest woman of her and they can now shag like bunnies all over the place. The Malfoy boys were perfect as usual and I suppose Harry etc...... Sorry it's like Ally McBeal. I loved that programme when it first started but only when SHE wasn't on screen.You know what I mean. Some actors just steal the film when they are supposedly playing second fiddle to the star....Die Hard....Robin Hood:Prince of Thieves. I think you get my gist.So......you want to see young Harry in the scud as it were. My sister and I were going to go to London when Equus was on there but never got round to it. And never mind Broadway, Rickman is supposed to champion small theatres so I'm sure that the guys from the brass band in our village of Lumb wouldn't mind giving up their hall for a few nights for him to do me....sorry....perform for me, in the play Private Lives. Or we could both do selected scenes from the film Don't Look Now. I fancy going back to Venice again. Apologies to Lady of Clunn. I'm sure many German people do like Monty Python. These people in Italy were just bemused. They probably weren't even German. They were probably........... Oh Christ! I'd best not say anymore in case I get into more trouble. But we were tanked up on two bottles of champers. It was our 25th wedding anniversay. And Ms Utopia from "God's Own Country" as my Yorkshire mates call it. I'm actually a Lancastrian Scot.....but.....I do think Sev was. No....is!!!! (I'm still in denial) a Yorkshireman......possibly from Huddersfield. Wasn't that where the Amsterdam Bar was in the 70s? But I digress. Oh and Seanie (Boromir or Sharpe)Bean. I had a signed photo of him but I think my sister nicked it. My husband knew his Dad though, through the steel trade and got me one. Ms Snape-Goddess, I am looking forward to the concluding chapter(s)with both delight and sadness as this great story is coming to an end. make there wedding night one to be proud of and let them go out with a bang. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx PS My daughter goes to Hogwarts. In a recent exam she did at Arizona State University (she's an exchange student) she got 101%. I kid you not.Only in the USA or the magical world of Rowling..........
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  • From ANON - Narcissas Sister on January 09, 2008
    Snape Godess,
    This is the first time I have reviewed anything on this site. I just had to tell you that I have read everything you have written and love it all. Hard to believe but you have made me a Lucius fan. But Severus and Remus are my personal favorites. I am also a mom and I love the dry wit of the brits. If you keep writting I'll keep reading. Hope your hubby stays safe and your kids stay fairly mellow (I don't know how you do it with three).Thanks for the stories. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Utopia on January 09, 2008
    This: http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600014530 is all your fault! LOL!
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  • From Utopia on January 09, 2008
    WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

    *dances crazily around room*

    That was... that was... yay? What do you say when a brilliant author takes your idea and makes it her own?!

    Lucius was rather proficient at doing up that corset, wasn't he? Makes me wonder how he learnt how to do that! Narcissa probably had a small army of ladies maids to get her dressed! Though, I have the image of Lucius being less than faithful, and having to re-lace the "other woman's" corset before he left her bedroom. Or perhaps his Mother instructed him on lacing corsets? Its a bit of a joke that Andy is house trained (ie. is reasonably proficient with the washing machine, iron, oven, hob, vacuum cleaner...), perhaps Lucius's Mother house-trained him in a manor that would be of use to a future pureblood wife? (And THAT little idea has a plot bunny biting! *ponders*). Evidently Draco wasn't privy to the same treatment; though he's probably more used to bras than corsets.

    Harry holding the flowers! Brilliant reaction! And the lilac wouldn't actually clash with any of the lads! Lilac is a brilliant colour for blondes, many hair products for blonds are lilac so they blend in better! (but they tend to cost a small fortune!); Lilac wouldn't have clashed with the scarlet of the Weasley hair (trust me, I'm a red-head); and, of course, black goes with anything, so Harry wouldn't have clashed either!

    I like how Sev complained over his formal robes; though, how is it different from his normal 'nunnish' attire that covers him completely while he's brewing potions? Perhaps the fabric is heavier, itchier (from lack of wear), a different colour? Aww... they'll soon be crumpled on the floor while Hermione ravishes her hubby.

    THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANK-YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU
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  • From kmplease on January 09, 2008
    Wow that was great, love it!!
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  • From Delfin on January 08, 2008
    awww that was so nice :)

    i could feel their emotions somehow :')

    love it, keep writing!
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  • From catysmom1028 on January 08, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From teenertots1 on January 08, 2008
    What a great chapter, I really enjoyed this whole story so far. You are so going to have to keep me up to date on if Rickman's going to be doing the show...Im only 40 minutes from NYC, and if hes in a show so close i bet i could make it in 20 running haha
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