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Reviews for Secrets

By : redheadfaerie
  • From ExperimentalMe on November 24, 2009
    Hot! It's nice of you to include one-on-one action in the beginning. I would have liked to read further along in the story though.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 13, 2008
    just what i was looking for! a smutty, well written threesome! thanks so much! i loved it!
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  • From luvhp on February 27, 2008
    Aww, that's it? No explanation!
    Wickedly sexy though!!!
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  • From Damiana on December 14, 2007
    Very nicely written. This makes one hope that you might consider continuing the story a little further. How DID the boys get together? Have they been in on it from the beginning?
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  • From TarnishedAngel on December 13, 2007
    Now, this is how you write a PWP. This was a delightfully steamy One-shot, and I really enjoyed it. My favorite moments were as follows:

    I thought Draco teasing and frustrating Hermione with slow and shallow thrusts was adorable. Harry using his "cuteness" to get Hermione to go upstairs with him was also adorable. You really had the wizards playing on their boyish charm and good looks in this one. Lucky Hermione gets to be the witch who benefits from it. First, she gets Draco to take her in a dusty Dungeon classroom, and then, Harry pounces on her in the boys' Gryffindor dorm. We should all have her problems (heehee).

    The best part of the fic was when Harry snuck up on Draco and Hermione (heehee). I LOVE his "having fun...?". I also LOVE Draco's "chuckle" and "as you wish" when Harry catches them; although, I get the impression that Draco and Harry planned this little rendezvous with their witch. The moment when they both took her was delicious, and I really enjoyed the Harry/Draco action. It was just the right amount of slash, and its addition didn't detract from Hermione. She still remained the boys' focus.

    All in all, a VERY yummy fic. Good job!!!
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  • From SoftObsidian74 on December 13, 2007
    Lynn, this story is HOT!!! Gonna read it again a few times...nice one!
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  • From on December 13, 2007
    HOT HOT HOT!!! Will you please write more???
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