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By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From MotekElm on April 15, 2017

    So disturbing. A story of sexual and physical abuse. Hermione should be the epitamy of power and fighting back. Why don't Harry and McGonagall help her? This story is dark. It left me feeling bad.


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  • From ANON - Dee on October 05, 2015
    Great story!
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  • From ANON - Refictionista on March 27, 2015
    Loved it! So dark and steamy!!
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  • From ANON - this and that on September 09, 2014
    Despite the sad ending for Hermione, it felt like a beautiful ending.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2014
    nice
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  • From ANON - khki on May 30, 2014
    I love how you write a possessive and protective Draco. Because he is. but Hermione should have been put more fight than this. It's too fast for her being submission. But you wrote a very good fiction. I love it. It should have been longer than this it's too short.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 04, 2012
    I love your possessive draco. This is quite a dark, delicious tale! Nicely written, interestiing to see narcissa so nice.
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  • From CafeAuLait on May 07, 2011
    :( Poor Hermione. I have to say that I preferred Pictures to this one, but mainly because of the HEA. I think I'd like it if she'd kill him one day. *g*
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  • From StarrCrystal on March 27, 2011
    This story is just so sad. Its like in the end she never could find
    her happy ending. This is a powerful story
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  • From skeeteronhols on January 06, 2011
    Poor Hermione, trapped with a man who didn't care about how she felt about anything; has no problem raping her every night and effectively made her give up her career because he was 'didn't want to be married to Molly Weasley'. Worlds where voldemort won and she's a sex slave would be more heartening than this one. She's a modern woman who managed to fall down a loophole into slavery that others managed to avoid. But, I would have liked to see more of what she was thinking; I would have believed her giving up more if it had been a slow progression. Rationalizing the blowjob as something temporary she had to do, for ex.
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  • From StarsAmericanTalk on January 05, 2011
    I loved this story! It's well written too.
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  • From purefaith91 on January 01, 2011
    Well that was just too sad. I have to admit that I skimmed much of the story because it was too much for me (sissy that I am). It really is only one more example of the kind of things perpetrated against children and portrayed skillfully by a great storyteller. Thanks for sharing your talent. p
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  • From EnyalTegger on December 19, 2010
    I'm the 200th reviewer! Wow, this story is AMAZING in every way. I LOVE dark, obsessive Draco every now and then, and you characterized him perfectly. The way he wanted to be sure that all of Hermione's feelings were caused by him, even anger and hatred, showed just how crazy and terrible he is. And he's such a bastard for controlling her in every way and flaunting her around. The interaction between Hermione and Draco was sexy and haunting, and the chase in chapter 9 was described so well; I'm so glad that you included a chase! I feel bad for Hermione, but I love how this isn't supposed to be a happy story; Draco is just a jerk and that's not going to change. I wish that this story was longer because it is too good!

    I loved these lines: "You know, for someone who just tried to commit adultery, you have a lot of self-righteous anger, love" AND "As long as I'm first, that's all that matters" (Ch. 9 is just great). Thanks for writing and sharing this seductive story! Love it, love, love it -- cheers!
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  • From katiekrm on July 08, 2010
    I read this a really long time ago at IATQO I think and it was so not my kind of fic. It was so disturbing and I wanted Hermione to be able to get out of that awful marriage so much. However, this fic was unforgettable and well written. Couldn't she just have poisoned him or something? And I wonder if Draco loves her at all. It makes you think. I was looking at this b/c I like your Veela fic so much and wanted to check out what else you've written. Even though most of this was disturbing, I have to admit I found the Blaise voyeur scene super hot.
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  • From jesswilson on May 22, 2010
    This story is AMAZING. This is how a marriage fic should be!! Hermione would NEVER want to marry Draco.
    I love how you kept everyone in character. Like Dark Draco, Weak Hermione, Manipulative Narcissa and supportive McGonagall! Everything about this story is just PERFECT! If only there were more like this, realistic!

    I will definetly be reading this again!! Well done!!!!!
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