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By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From HoneyB9 on December 17, 2007
    u know what,i like DARK DRACO and weak hermione,infact i dont think she is weak in this story,she is just being less bitchy,thats all. i read the other reviews,and i have to say to u that u dont have to change anthing in this story,this first chapter is perfect and i already inlove with it! i do beleive that Draco is not a strait up jerk,and hopefully he'll be romantic and start loving hermione in the future.but dont turn this into 100% fluff and smut fic,i hate it when draco being overly sweet and overly nice coz that is so not draco,He is a MALFOY for god sake.not obnoxiously bastard,but an irresistable lady killer =)(u know wat i mean,not a cold blooded murderer..lol)

    i'm waiting for the part when husband rape their wife (i'm not twisted,but draco is too hot,its not going to be rape once hermione enjoyed it..i'm sure she will)
    If blaise watch draco take hermione might be damn hot..why not..lol
    Hermione will love draco rite?they will get married and live happily ever after rite? with sum drama,break up and make up ,rite?
    u make me want draco like crazy ya know..lol how i wish i can trade place wit hermione,i seriously wouldnt be bother if he want to take me by force or watver he please..lol..coz he is draco,that mean i'll enjoy it.


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  • From miakitty on December 17, 2007
    OMG,I LOVE IT SO MUCH! GOSH,THIS IS PROBALY THE ONLY NON-DARK DRAMIONE FIC THAT I REALY LIKE. I AM A BIG FAN OF DARK FIC COZ I LOVE DRACO BEING EVIL,MEAN AND SADISTIC (CALL ME CRAZY OR WATVER)BCOZ HE IS SEXY WHEN HE IS EVIL, AND LOTS OF PEOPLE KNOW THAT! ANYWAY,LOVE THE WHOLE STORY,I LIKE THE MARRIAGE LAW (DONT EVER CHANGE THAT LAW UNTIL THE END OF THE STORY)I KNOW SUM PEOPLE DOESNT LIKE HERMIONE BEING TOO SOFT OR WEAK (SINCE SHE IS ALWAYS BITCHY AND TOO BLOODY BRAVE ALL THE TIME)BUT SHE IS BETTER WHEN SHE IS NICE AND SUBMISSIVE TO DRACO. (MALE DOM IS WAY HOTTER)OFCORZ SHE REBEL,BUT WHEN SHE REBEL TOO MUCH,ITS REALY ANNOYING. NOW THAT SHE IS A LADY,SHE SHOULD BEHAVE LIKE ONE.NACRISSA IS COOL IN DIZ FIC,THANK YOU FOR KILLING RON (COZ I HATE OTHER MALE CHARACHTER THAT BLOCK HERMIONE AND DRACO RELATIONSHIP)

    I CANT WAIT FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!U HAVE TO PROMISE ME THAT U WILL FINISH THIS STORY.I HATE IT WHEN A GREAT STORY LEFT UNFINISHED!I'VE BEEN LOOKING FOR A FORCE MARRIAGE STORY,U R MY SAVIOUR!






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  • From reirei on December 16, 2007
    I am enjoying it. Must read the other story to see and note on differences. :P Good work!!!!!!!
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  • From titfortat on December 16, 2007
    Wow you really are a little stroy factory it really is brill to see.

    I like this goos start. Draco seems a lot more of a down right bastard in this than in any of your other fics. But I like it. One question I was not total sure what Hermiones feeling where while she was giving Draco a blow job was she secrectly enjoying it cus it was Malfoy or that she was thinking and remebering Ron or a bit of both.

    Anyway still great as allways and I shal leave my self in your tursting hands
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on December 16, 2007
    Pretty good start,
    I'm not really very into marriage law fics,
    But this one seems interesting.
    Kepp up the good work.

    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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  • From catysmom1028 on December 16, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From goldentrio on December 15, 2007
    WOW!!! I'm really looking forward to more of this story. Please continue. It was an amazing first chapter and highly intriguing.
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  • From wudelfin on December 15, 2007
    christ another weak hermione...
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  • From Emmylovedraco on December 15, 2007
    Please update soon PLEASEEEE'''
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  • From Heidi191976 on December 15, 2007
    This is a great story. I can't wait to read more soon. I hope that Hermione can use her wand to do her school work or else why even continue. Draco is cruel towards her but I hope that they can begin to love each other.
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  • From mariecke22 on December 15, 2007
    LOVE IT!!! really like it so far!! please update soon!!!
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  • From linmo on December 15, 2007
    Wow, you should definitely go on with this story. The beginning is intriguing enough. I have to say the abusive Droca is a bit scary. I am wondering how Hermione can get some leverage. The story won't be so interesting if she is only an abused party. Looking forward more.
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  • From chickaboo on December 15, 2007
    Well I'm intrigued and I'd like to read more so please continue!
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  • From chyara on December 15, 2007
    interesting... and revolting at the same time... i hope to hell she's able to get back at him.
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  • From bananasforyou on December 15, 2007
    poor hermione but i love it already!
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