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By : Gryffindorclutz
  • From nonentity on June 24, 2008
    Very interesting ending, that brought the focus back to the fact not that the Malfoys purchased her, but that she was sold by the Ministry for the "greater good" and that they remain a "poster family". I like that she still thinks of Ron when she sees Harry and Ginny, and that Draco and Hermione's relationship remains fundamentally unchanged.

    A couple of slight errors--Hermione was 18 when she conceived, and probably barely 19 when Scorpius was born, so she shouldn't still be 28. And it's unlikely Ginny got pregnant within a year of Hermione since Ginny's a year behind.

    I reread some of the first chapter again to see what Earhart's like. The letter from him and his condescending tone are very nice detailing.
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  • From elibdally on June 22, 2008
    Please tell me you haven't finished this story. Man, I wanted another smut. If it is comlete, it was a story worth waiting for!!!
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  • From Terrie on June 17, 2008
    This story made me angry, upset, frustrated and constantly thinking of what Hermione should do and why no one cared what was happening. It kept me lying in bed thinking of what I would do to get back at him and/or the Wizarding World. In short a brilliant story. Very well written with a well executed original idea. I will remember this story long after many of the other "happy ending" stories have faded.
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  • From lbjackson on June 17, 2008
    This last chapter was so aptly titled. It seemed Hermoine only hope for a life of her own it to pray for Draco to die and I don't think that will happen anytime soon. He will stubbornly live a long life just to torment her. Is this the end of the story?
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  • From Cathartesaura on June 17, 2008
    Wow, this was really well-written, thanks for posting this. I like these kinds of relationships (just not in real life).
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  • From margotlefaye on June 17, 2008
    Wow. That was quite the ride. It would have been completely unbelievable for Draco to have been redeemed, or for Hermione to have fallen in love with him after the horrific abuse he put her through. This ending really suits the fic. Hardly happy, as the title of the last chapter acknowledges. Really angsty. But really fitting. I love that Hermione hasn't become broken. She loves her children, she's doing what she has to do to survive, and she knows her limits. But she still resists Draco to the limits of her ability. This is a pretty devastating tale, very well told. I think you did an amazing job with the premise of the original fic.
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  • From LadyofClunn on June 17, 2008
    I think you gave your story the best ending possible. Not really happy, but "realistic". Hermione has arranged herself with the reality of her life, even though it is not ideal and she definitely is a victim of both the Ministry and her husband. She survives and makes sure, that her children will grow up to be decent people. Not a life I would wish on anybody, but a life I would expect to be the result of a marriage law.

    Wonderful job!
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  • From genna on June 17, 2008
    I weep for a reality this stark and cruel. No hope. No end. No happiness.

    Fictional character, Hermione, I hope your marriage improves and your world widens. I'd hate to think in this day and age a woman feels this owned by a man even in someone's imagination. Why even wake up in the morning if this is the best that can happen?
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  • From ichiruki on June 17, 2008
    Wow, that ending was definitely different. Angst all the way through. Kudos for doing something a bit different, even though it wasn't sweet as much as devious, underhanded, possessive, and all, lol, it sure was an interesting read.
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  • From Heidi191976 on June 17, 2008
    Excellent. I look forward to reading more to see if Hermione finally gets a girl.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 17, 2008
    Oh my god, that was just brilliant, you've written wonders and everytime I read your stories I just can't help but savor them as I'm reading them, this was such a perfect chapter to Sold.
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  • From sugypunk on June 17, 2008
    I'm so glad that you finished this story! I remember reading it awhile ago, and the finale was the perfect ending. Reading through it again, it seemed like Draco had a form of bipolar disorder. lol. Good job, very dark fic.
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  • From starrynite45 on June 17, 2008
    Really Angst! aww...poor Hermione, did she ever love Draco? if it's me i would have been Stockholm's syndrome already -_-'

    well, was this the last chapter? i'm not sure
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  • From bananasforyou on June 17, 2008
    wow is there going to be more? poor her.
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  • From blufalcon on April 17, 2008
    Well done so far. Draco is just one crazed obsessed dude isn't he. Will hermione ever fall for him ? And will he learn to love her right ?
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